|Reviews for A Short Reprieve|
| Vindel chapter 9 . 1/30
Salute to Jihl for managing to push two half-yun and half-umbra babies out of her. 8 hours of pain and then she returns to her usual joking self. Gotta love Jihl, really. And Fang, how precious she was when she saw and held her little one. This chapter is beautiful very beautiful. Hope Lightning's birthing goes just as well as Jihls has and of course with everyone around for support. I wonder if watching Jihl give birth has made her worried for her own.
Thank you mother
| Vindel chapter 8 . 1/30
Aww man, Lightning and Fang's little cute exchanges tug at my heart strings. Can't wait to see more of that and have Jihl join in as well. I still through my head back at Rhea when she mentions Fang's "pointy". I'm happy to see Fang so much more open with Light and vise verse.
I'm glad that Jeanne is very open to Lightning about what the operation going on in Cocoon. The sentence that Jeanne said though brought shivers down my spine; damn. Thanks mother
| sapphire9164 chapter 10 . 1/25
Too awesome woman!
| audy17 chapter 1 . 1/17
Glad your back prudence! I was just wondering though if we would get any kind of back info on fang? Like how did the umbra know she was ragnarok and how they managed to track capture and seal fang. A bit more info on what's going on with fang as the story progresses would be great. I've already got a good feel on were jihl,light and their parents are the most I've gotten from fang is that she believes she is some evil rapist who should obey the wishes of the umbra and have nothing to do with her offspring. If she is good then she can get a pat on a head and might get the chance to play dad part time. other then loathing or blind lust that's all Ican pin on fang from the previous story and this one. What's going to give? Fang breaking the seal and going ham on everyone? Curious as to how fang became orphaned too...did the umbra wipe out her parents. I topics could make for great filler chaps as flashbacks or something
| ShadowCub chapter 10 . 1/14
Fang really needs to Ragnarok on some of these Umbra.
| megamar chapter 10 . 1/14
Things are getting more complicates
can't wait to see how its turn out
thanks for the chapter
| EpicFlight13 chapter 10 . 1/14
So now we have Yuns brutally slaughtering men and leaving them to rot. Given what the bastards of Cocoon have done, I certainly don't blame them, but it's still pretty disturbing. This Rowan character has me more than a little worried. Clearly she'd been effected by the death of her Umbra daughter in a similar fashion that Roma was; definitely not a good sign. Why exactly is she so eager to find the Yuns responsible for the massacre?
As I've said before, I am very happy to see Fang so happy and comfort around Lightning and Jihl. That being said, I am very worried about what the parents' discussion regard Fang and their daughters might lead to. Granted everyone's well being is at stake, but dammit, grant Fang some happiness in her miserable life!
Very concerning chapter! Still nothing but love for this story/arc! Have to see where it goes from here!
| Miria chapter 9 . 1/12
Lol! Gotta love Jihl. I'm hooked on this story! I can't wait for the next chapter! . But for some reason I can't help but feel that something bad is gonna happen to lightning when she gives birth. Idk why i feel this way. Anyway, awesome job!
| Pharaoh187 chapter 9 . 1/11
Please update soon ! I love this! Truly a masterpiece!
| ShadowCub chapter 9 . 1/10
Poor Fang, seems her immediate family is about to get bigger, can't wait for the triplets to get here.
| EpicFlight13 chapter 9 . 1/10
I really wanted to have a lot to say here, but the only word that comes to mind is: BEAUTIFUL! The first of Fang, Jihl, and Lightning's children have finally been born. I know it's a new experience for all three of them, but I'm most curious to see how Fang in particular handles things. No doubt a lot of reassurance is going to be needed, but that just means more heartwarming moments to look forward to.
To babies down, three more to go. I totally can't wait! XD
| The Shinobi Guardian chapter 9 . 1/10
Wow, that was just...wow. I've never seen a baby being actually born (xcept on tv of course) but reading that was really intense for me. Jihl's babies are out of her stomach and Lightning is next on the birthlist so that should be interesting too, I kinda anticipated how Jihl's delivery would go on some level but it still didn't make it any less intense. Love the new chapter and can't wait 4 d nxt. .\/,,
| Kitty chapter 8 . 1/9
Great chapter glad your still writing. Hope you have time to update silver lining! :)
| ShadowCub chapter 8 . 1/8
Poor Fang she's on everyone's short list and Rhea still has me laughing over the, "she wants your baby daddy comment." LOL!
| EpicFlight13 chapter 8 . 1/7
FLIGHT MOMENT! YAY! XD
Bonding over weapon maintenance; beautiful (lol). Seriously though, it really is great to see being so much more open around Lightning, even to the point of joking around with her. And the mud-fight with Rhea was an enjoyable, playful moment for the two of them. It's nice to see Fang having fun. Lightning and Jihl really are making things better for her; at least in some way.
As for the ending, that is some heavy, heavy stuff. The situation with the Cocoon women is undoubtedly taking its toll. With the decisions the Umbra have to make and the adjustments the rescued woman are going through, one can only wonder where things are going to go from here. There is definitely a lingering theme of these stories: In the end, how does Fang come out of all of this?