Reviews for Naruto the Second Juubi
benny88 chapter 4 . 7/19
LFFwf
Guest chapter 15 . 7/3
Cool
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1
Oh hey I come from the future, wanna fuck? Am I too overpowered? Seriously rewrite your shitty story. Every other fucking story is basically the same as this. And you assholes wonder why we hate dumbasses like yourself who basically follow every fucking cliche.
780 chapter 26 . 7/3
Ahh! Please don't abandone the story, I enjoy it so much, please keep writing!
Assanjin chapter 26 . 5/28
Marvelous, magnificent, radiant and wonderful. When I read this I became addicted and read every chapter at once. I cannot tell you how much I love this story. The story, the action, the humor...it's all so...perfect. I thank you for all your hard work and can't wait for the next chapter.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/20
On thing I hate is harem and gender bending I wold read this if it didn't have those
Guest chapter 19 . 4/23
This the best story ever
TylerJay333 chapter 15 . 4/6
don't listen to the haters. this is very interesting. I'm very interested in seeing how you bring in kushina and tsyunada.
juubi madara chapter 20 . 3/30
okay there is a little bit of power lvls not matching right now but i'm guessing once naruto gains full control over his powers he will be around or above juubi madara's level and kaguya's chakra levels he didn't go full out on hashirama idk if he released his seals but he didn't use his magatama rinnegan just wondering if you think orochimaru is even 2% hashirama's or madaras level because he ain't
juubi Madara chapter 19 . 3/30
so you gave naruto a chakra cloak for the juubi mmmhhh okay it does work with canon powers seeing how chakra cloak is a shit ton of normal chakra which means you either need foreign chakra like when ashura got help from his father and cult to fight indra he had chakra cloak hands or you need a lot of sage chakra aka kurama that can produce the normal chakra needed or the tenseigan which i'm not sure how that works
Juubi Madara chapter 13 . 3/30
so i'm guessing because he is now pure sage energy like kaguya who was the ten tails in the show however naruto doesn't have control over his own foreign spiritual side sage energy therefore when it's unsealed it takes a form like obito who also didn't have great control over his body side sealed Juubi sage energy therefore he takes a form that resembles the juubi's original form more fleshy and not like madara and kaguya who had more or full control and could look however they pleased with the proper markings of course so i'd expect once this naruto gains more control over his chakra and spirit/life force/sage energy that he will take a form similar to kaguya also the marking of the rinnegan on top of the 9 magatama in groups of 3 on his back shouldn't be there that is for if the juubi is sealed with a specific technique hamura and kaguya never had these because they're sage energy isn't sealed it's more a part of them and hagoromo had one like madara's because he used the rinnegan to seal the juubi inside himself
Guest chapter 8 . 3/29
really good chapter no weird human interactions and dam descent
juubi madara chapter 6 . 3/29
nice lemon m8 ;)
Pomf~Waa what are we gonna do on the bed?.
also is he gonna fuck his own mom that's gonna be a little more messed up then fucking himself.
Guest chapter 3 . 3/29
better but still it slips into weirdness that in no situation would a human even in anime would work
Guest chapter 2 . 3/29
not bad spacing good sentencing can't really say the interactions or story is that great but hey its a harem it ain't that important
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