Reviews for Son of the Moon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm noticing a few mistakes here and there but they're easy enough to ignore. Also you switch from second to first pov mid sentence which while I find it a little annoying is also able to be ignored. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will isn't an archer. He's a healer |
![]() ![]() ![]() This fic makes me feel weird without Zeus being an absolute douchbag XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() tooooo fast |
![]() ![]() OMG I CAN JUST IMANING CHIBI PERCY CALLING PHEOBE PHE PHE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the list of suggestions. Fing fantastic |
![]() ![]() This is AMAZING! Please keep going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no...that's definitely not good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() dog u gotta use authors notes |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thunder run really? |
![]() ![]() Having that’s many sister would be fun but also suck |
![]() ![]() I’m pretty sure Luke just shit himself |
![]() ![]() ![]() I first came across this story a few years ago, and now, seeing it again…it is fantastic! A lot of people gave you bad reviews, but I think it’s amazing! You did a great job! Love it, and hope you keep updating! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly the pacing is so bad. It’s written in a way to where everything feels like a random event. Also you do POV’s only to write in third person. Lastly my biggest problem with most Percy raised by Artemis stories is how it’s always a let’s hate Poseidon story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jesus Christ I hope you start pacing things later cause this have been the most ridiculous two chapters I’ve ever read. |