Reviews for Remnants of Past Mistakes
FrostedDragonHeart chapter 1 . 4/6
I thought that this was amazing! I liked how you handled Bunny in particular in this situation. I feel like he would be the panicking mess that he was when he didn't know how to handle the situation. And the old git can get a little soft when it comes to Jack, especially in scenarios like this one. I thought that the story was gripping from start to end. I just wanted to keep reading! Great idea and seamlessly executed! Thank you!
Izzybella12 chapter 1 . 11/16/2016
Amazing story! I really loved it. The angst was awesome. It made me tear up a little bit at some parts. Over all, I loved it.
WinterCrystal1009 chapter 1 . 7/6/2016
One of the best oneshots I've EVER read. Gotta make a sequel xD
Blitza chapter 1 . 5/11/2016
So cute!
PeterPanfan13 chapter 1 . 4/3/2016
Great story! I found it interesting and I loved it! Great job!
empty to be deleted chapter 1 . 5/29/2015
God, you're perfect at writing all the characters. It's so beautiful! Jack and Bunny and Sandman were so in-character it was nearly mind blowing! I thank you for writing Jack like this rather than how some other people write him where he cores if he makes it snow a bit too hard. You're Jack is definitely more on spot. I think that he would hardly ever cry unless you temporarily mess up his personal reality with something like...nightmare sand. I mean, he's spent 300 years alone. I'm pretty sure he got all of his tears out around the 200 mark at least. Anyways, I want you to know that your style of writing is awesome. I love all of your stories.
jessLpfy chapter 1 . 2/5/2015
Thanks for the write!
dizappearingirl chapter 1 . 1/30/2015
I didn't find this too OOC. I found it a good interpretation of Bunny and Jack. It may not necessarily be my instant, YES that's right! But at the same time you made it very reasonable and understandable.

Plus I just like to eat up hurt/comfort/angst so I am very happy with this :D This was good. A great, let's be reminded that Jack had to suffer through quite a bit alone and it's gonna take a lot to help him kinda story. Feel the guilt, Bunny! Bwhahaha...

But also, like Sandy said, have hope too. It's gonna work out. :)

Good job!
Sintaks chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
I love bunny's reaction. I just have one question, why would pitch target jack knowing he would only be strong enough for one attack? Pitch would know that whatever damage he does with nightmare sand could be easily remedied with sandy's help, so why would he stage an attack if no permanent damage would be done, also leaving him weaker than before since he had to use much of his power. And why Jack? Why not Bunny? It could be reasoned that Jack was the main threat, or Pitch simply wanted revenge on Jack for foiling all his plans previously, which would be the most logical reason since with vengeance, he wouldn't care for how effective it was, just that he hurt Jack at all. I'm just saying that's a terrible battle plan. No lasting damage on the enemy, Pitch used up his own strength, and now the guardians are on to him about how he managed to regain so much of his power enough to attack in such a short period of time.
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
Love it so much
Make war not love. war is fun chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
cool story
skylaeatpie chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
Awesomeness. I loved it! Bravo!
Melantha Frost chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
I've read this a number of times, just because it's a good piece. I never realized it was you who wrote 'the Tale of a Forgotten Frost Child.' I'm gonna go and read more of your stories now :)
Bionic Egypt chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
Oh my gosh, this was so sad! I can totally see how Jack could be afraid of being left alone again. If I was him, I'd be terrified of it. You're really great at writing stuff like this. Keep up the good work!
OinkyThePiggy chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
I really liked this Bunny 'n Frost moment. Bunny's like a big brother to Frost, even if neither of them want to admit it :)
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