Reviews for A Testament of Things that Never Will
ddentler21 chapter 8 . 8/28
Seems a stretch that nature chakra has enough intent imbued in it to reject Naruto to the point of lethality. Especially since it’s abused by cursed seals and the like but it’s your prerogative
dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 8/24
Interesting chapter and plot and idea
moodysavage chapter 16 . 8/22
wahhhhhh! You left it there?! Please add more to this awesome story!
moodysavage chapter 14 . 8/21
wow... that was an amazingly harsh lesson Naruto learned at that council meeting. This story is awesome by the way.
Diamond June chapter 16 . 8/17
I enjoy what you write, even you change the plot, it for the better and It's interesting to read. I love it, there are little interact/dialogue between Yuri and other Jounin so I hope you could place more to maybe help Yuri get more supportive and move on from the past. Thank you
Pucusi81 chapter 16 . 8/11
You have a very good plot here, with so many avenues to explore, it's a shame that you didn't finish this story.
stylo1 chapter 16 . 7/31
it wasnt really a time travel story, just a jonin who play mediator for some genin. mostly because before any real changes came about you stopped writing.
i also think you put to much time in small missions. and the fighting was prety lame, like i said before yuki's skills should be much better and the fight in land of waves was wrong, they got a message for help which took 4 days to arrive and the came in a battle that was nearly done. so unless they where stalked for 4 days the fight lasted for 4 days. later with narutos second mission help was out 15min yet looked like it came much sooner.
all in all it had potential but the story has hardly started and it was not so good that it was worth it
stylo1 chapter 6 . 7/30
so this first battle was a suprise, 3 jonin, 1 chunin vs 1 kage, 2 jonin and 6 chunin. yet it ends in a stale mate? we're tslking about yuri a kage who went up against pain. doesnt seem right. makes for good sensation though, about the same as a civilian holding off a biju, plausible sure likely no
Emerald Time chapter 16 . 7/26
That's it? I didn't even realize when 16 chapters went by! And now that I look at the date, I realize it hasn't been updated since Dec. 2014! T_T Please, please tell me that it's just a really long hiatus and the fic is not actually abandoned? I really enjoyed this story and I hope you can find time to write for it soon!
marion4203 chapter 1 . 6/23
sorry I meant story myy spell check is wired
marion4203 chapter 1 . 6/23
l love the store I hope you come back to it and finish it
SasuNaruIsMyReligion chapter 1 . 5/27
for the romance... ino? seriously? I'm kind of not sure if I'll continue reading... hmmmm
Haygomez chapter 16 . 5/23
Great story, nice advancing plot and character growth. Intresting narrative set-pieces as well. The Raikage scene and Hyugga scenes come to mind as pivotal stroy drivers. Thanks so much for creating someting to enjoy. Hope you continue this sometime. Cheers
Haygomez chapter 1 . 5/20
Like how the time travel plot gets going right away. Naruto admits he's a time traveler and the Hokage just goes with it. Like the plot so far.
yeap chapter 1 . 4/23
Hi, you probably left the fandom, but your stories are amazing, that one that was in progress, about Naruto, Time Travel and teaching at the academy was my fav so far, thank you.
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