|Reviews for Wish Upon a Star|
| TheBigK1 chapter 24 . 5/19
loved this story and I hope you still plan to make a sequel!
| Curioser chapter 11 . 1/8
This is such a fun read. Your dialogue and characterization are damn near perfect.
| Guest chapter 24 . 9/15/2017
I'm not sure why you been receiving a lot of negative criticism. The whole point is that it's your story and sure it might not exactly be to comics or whatever but I personally enjoyed the story. I would of enjoyed watching this as season 6 anyway. I know it's been a long while but i would love to see a sequel to this story is was well written and I enjoyed the twist that you add and also a lot of stories do something similar with robin pushing starfire away. Anyway hope whatever your doing is going well.
| boring chapter 1 . 8/16/2017
if cartoon network would make a post tokyo season of teen titans and this would be it (your horrible , sad , depressing, boring story), then tokyo, the moral and the lesson robin have learned during that time, means nothing. tokyo would be all pointless . way to make robin a cockblocking, stubborn obsessive jerk dckhead all over again
| Sunnie Lyn chapter 24 . 5/11/2017
I hate that most authors and readers put on their minds that Batman would be against Rob and Star's relationship when in fact he does approve of them as seen in the TTG Comic, smiling while watching Robin and Starfire kiss on the rooftop. Batman being stern and controlling Dick Grayson's life? That's totally a lie! Dick Grayson would allow Batman to interfere with his personal life? No way! The reason why left batman was because he felt like he was being treated like a kidjust like what Batman is doing to robin here) and wanted to be independent, so there's no way Robin would let him mind his own "Personal life". In fact Robin would be angry if he ever did! Batman would be happy to see Robin happy, cared by someone special to him just like he was when his parents we're alive and that's Starfire! Come on people . lol Batman will support Robin's relationship with Star along the way, he cares for Robin, and understands his pains when his parents died and don't want to see him lonely and uncared again. Batman isn't an immature ass whipping dad, Batman doesn't lack understanding, Batman values and cares about personal issues. Batman isn't an asshole and a jerk , Batman isn't a manipulative mind controlling dad. Know that. I like your writing , I think your a talented person,you got skills in writing but I totally hate your storyline. It's pointless, confusing, complicated and boring especially what you did to RobStar and what you did to Robin. It seems like I can't connect to your robin. It's so unlike him,, and it pisses me off how you made him a stone and a dick. Starfire in the bottom of his priorities? That's so sad. There's no way Robin would be like this, so distant and uncaring to Starfire, allowed his hero side to get the best of him all over again especially after all they've been through in Tokyo, the part where he finally realize he doesn't have to be a hero (moreover a hero only) to be someone worthwhile. The part where Finally robin saw the light , finally overcome his hero side, if your story would actually happen in the series, then Tokyo and everything that happened there would be all useless. Robin still haven't learned anything then eh? Robin is still dumbass cock. Robin won't be like this to Starfire , in fact he will deeply value and cherish their relationship even if Jump City would be shattered to pieces upon returning home. Nothing takes priority over starfire. She's important to him. He loves her. I don't hate you,I think your a great writer and I think you can do RobStar better than this. This story is just not good at portraying the characters accurately.
| Sunnie Lyn chapter 1 . 5/1/2017
| StarRobfan chapter 24 . 2/7/2017
Not sure if your still active but I just wanted to let you know that this is an amazing story and portrays each character exactly as I remember from the tv series. With the likes of starfire and robin which as you can probably tell I'm kinda obsessed about, are really well told in the story with robin doing what he does best by pushing her away. Also red x is another character which I personally think was underused in the tv show. I was kinda surprised that you didn't have more of a love triangle and date with speedy was really unexpected. Don't get me wrong I can't see starfir e with anyone else but robin but I thought you might play a bit more on that and make robin feel worse. However as we know robin finally comes to his senses and it plays off in a way that made me happy. Don't know if you still planning that sequel which I hope is still coming. I just wanted to write this because you deserved the praise.
| ginger911 chapter 24 . 1/26/2017
please do a diamond in the sky soon
| princessstar chapter 1 . 12/23/2016
please do a sequel
| Guest chapter 23 . 12/9/2016
You should do nightwing and starfire wedding that goes as planned as the Reuters were suposed to do but that Didnt happen becasuse nightwing were begining to become popular but ther where suposed to end up married either that nightwing find a Cure to starfires coma or save from Aliens and prove himself as a great superhero up there With the rest
| RPGPersona chapter 24 . 10/10/2016
Stumbled upon this story when I decided to check out the list of stories over the 100k mark. I usually have a Beast Boy tag active when I look through Teen Titan fiction. Both because I am a big fan of BBxRae and because, like you mentioned in the second Author Notes, Beast Boy is a character that is easy to misinterpret. It easy to just look at the surface and judge him from jokestar attitude and assume he is a complete idiot. Nothing turns me off a story more then seeing Beast Boy portrayed like that. I am also a big Beast Boy fan and I thought you did a great job writing him, as well as the other Titans. This whole story was great and I enjoyed every minute I spent reading it.
From the main conflict with the L'Andrexi, tying them to the strange creature from the final episode, to how you handled the relationships with the Titans. It was all very entertaining. Robin struggle under Batman's shadow trying to change and become his own person. Starfire dealing with the emotion stress of Robin's back and forth. Of course the moment with Beast Boy and Raven were my favourite, by that is my bias talking.
You really did a good job with Beast Boy, showing that while he hasn't had a formal education like the others, and has limited knowledge in many fields, he does have subjects he is passionate about and therefore knowledgable of. You hinted at was beyond Beast Boy smile, without going into too much detail, since this is primarily a RobStar story.
Then there was Red X. You really had me guessing about who he is the whole story. I am still guessing now. The fact that I am not very familiar with the comics doesn't help.
I could continue to gush on, but let me finish here by saying thanks for writing this great story. I truly think it was a well written piece of fiction.
| si chapter 24 . 9/11/2016
please do a diamond in the sky soon
| mi chapter 16 . 9/11/2016
the mobster was named tony zucco not danny zucco
| vi chapter 24 . 9/4/2016
please do diamond in the sky
| Guest chapter 23 . 8/12/2016