Reviews for Ice and Fire
tttt chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
- For me it is a very good for prologue. I want to ask you, are you want Kallen become a truly heir of Stadtfeld and aristocracy girl and live at the Pendragon City serve the emperor meanwhile her heart burning with hatred and revenge. At the Pendragon she meet Lelouch and fall love with him.

Sorry, my language not good. I hope you understand what I write.
NIX'S WARDEN chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
wow. I like this idea. Very belivable. Thou Marrian will not be happy.
Muse of Schleissheim chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
Very good. It's too soon to give any judgement on this, but so far I like it.
Van the Rogue Soul Drinker chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
Not a bad opening chapter, it set up things nicely and get people revved up for the next chapter. I withhold my full feeling and a review til it has a few more chapter under its belt. I look forward to your next chapter.
Lord22 chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
This was an excellently written piece. It's to early to judge it just yet, but it looks like it could be interesting. I'll keep looking at this.
sephiroth12285 chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
not bad, a good start...a bit dark at the end but hell I love it.
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