|Reviews for You look sad when you think he can't see you|
| Sendai chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
And here I thought all your work was in German. I cleverly figured that if you were going to translate your new fic, well then maybe you translated another one. And you did!
It is fantastic and very sad and did not cheer me up a bit. I mean now, I have The Fall angst on top of my 'worrying about Mary in HFV' angst. That is basically angst squared and very, very bad.
I must also say that you seem to have the editing under very good control, if this is an example of your of English as a first language writers have terrible grammar and spelling. Other than a couple missing commas (which I had to LOOK for), I saw nothing wrong at all.
The story is sweet, and so sad. "...now John was in his life and everything had changed."
Yes. That is exactly right, and nothing else needs to be said.
| Sarah chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
| Rocking the Redhead chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
Never underestimate Molly. She is brilliant!