|Reviews for Mass Effect 3: The Miracle at Palaven|
| Darth Garak chapter 8 . 2/26
Just finished reading this. Great job describing the events leading up to the Miracle and what followed. It felt like a historical story - very well done. I greatly enjoyed this.
| jgkitarel chapter 9 . 2/20
This was an exceptionally powerful piece which demonstrates the Reaper War's scale on a single world in a way that ME3 couldn't. I also agree with you in the opinion that the coalition of races that Shepard managed to cobble together wouldn't have been able to win the Reaper War without the Deus Ex Machina that the Crucible was. Well, not in the way they set it up.
| Warhammer 2-4 chapter 9 . 1/11
This was quite a joy to read. Thank you for sharing this with us.
| palkia chapter 9 . 10/13/2013
Faved this story a few weeks back and have been meaning to post a review - because I seriously can't believe the review count isn't in the hundreds for this piece of work! The voice you wrote in was so spot on - meticulous in detailing logistics and strategies while also painting characters I found myself connecting with emotionally. The way you write action so good, there's a real sense of danger and adrenaline . Not to mention the vast cast you created - all of them memorable in some way. Stunning piece of work , thank you for sharing.
| G Stormcrow chapter 9 . 7/1/2013
A simply fantastic read! I loved the painstaking details you included the retelling, to include all aspects of warfare, from logistics, morale, pre-planning, testing, to the ultimate execution. And the politics, I always love a good political intrigue in the storyline.
Thank you for writing this story, it must have taken a lot of serious effort.
| Zakeraz chapter 9 . 6/20/2013
Thanks for an incredibly fun read. I might have to get into writing my own stories after seeing what incredible work you have come up with. I plowed through this as quickly as I could and I have to say, it was a hell of a fun ride.
| casquis chapter 9 . 6/20/2013
hey, just finished reading your story. It was amazing, simply amazing, certainly one of my favorite pieces of work in the site. I absolutely loved it.
That being said, I would love it if you wrote something similar to this about the Battle of Earth. Anyways, I look forward to whatever it is you write next.
| survivor686 chapter 9 . 6/15/2013
This is by far one of the higher quality fics out there with regards to the ME universe. You manage to create characters, explain events and weave together a tale that is quite spellbinding.
I can only imagine that this fic hasn't got more reviews, is that everyone is struck in awe by how well written and executed it is.
| SpudForce chapter 8 . 6/8/2013
I demand to know why you do not work for Bioware yet?! You could give them a pointer or two...or three on how to write an awesome ending.
| Granten chapter 8 . 6/5/2013
A good fic, especially considering the total lack of any mention of it (besides a brief codex entry) in the game itself.
| NoNameAvailable Bis chapter 9 . 6/4/2013
Well, let's review while properly registered, this time.
I honestly don't know what to say, except perhaps a well-thought "Bravo". Your fiction is quite atypical, but is probably one of the best around in this particular fandom. Plus, I'm always interested by a "main-character free" story (be it Shepard/Grey Warden/Revan/Spirit Monk, ect...). The world-building you did for this fic was astounding, while keeping well within canon.
Anyway, thanks a lot for this great story. It's been a treat.
| FloridaMagpie chapter 8 . 6/3/2013
Great read, thanks so much!
| Wild Goose 01 chapter 8 . 6/2/2013
I loved this on Spacebattles, and I love it here.
In all honesty, after the Miracle itself, this is my favorite part of the story. Maybe it's because I'm drawn to the personal stories of the people who took part in the Miracle, and for the hope that after the end, life goes on. And so we happy few step forward, going forth, not only to survive, but to prosper.
I believe in miracles.
| pmeslin chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
Having already read the whole story somewhere else, I can only say that this is fractally phenomenal. This is a delight at every conceivable level of resolution. Zooming in on any part of the story finds sections and chapters exactly as spectacular as the entire story. Stephen Ambrose would be proud.
Actually, this might be apropos. watch?vZC3VneYRT_8
| AustinGamer117 chapter 7 . 5/25/2013
This is a very well-written story; can't wait for more.