Reviews for stare |
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![]() ![]() I love this story so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This last chapter seems a bit nonsensical. I don't understand what you're trying to say, and why there was a sudden switch to bold lettering. Perhaps a beta reader can help you clean it up? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting chapter, but I might recommend using a beta to help clear up the grammatical errors. |
![]() ![]() When are you going to update I really really want to read more so when is chapter 7 coming out |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue, it's the only thing I can read! I can't stop thinking about what is going to happen next! please UPDATE! :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):) :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is good and i want to know what happens next, update soon |
![]() ![]() I am following and stalking this story! Ha Ha Ha! Bad joke! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit! What the hell is going on? |
![]() ![]() Hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() Hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sounds cool. Can't wait till chapter two! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet story I like it |