Reviews for Baby Steps
Anonymous chapter 31 . 3/1
I have to say, you made this sort of situation pretty damn casual, which is the main problem with this story. If you plan to write these sort of stories, please make sure the sort of situation that you're writing about.
Guntherson962 chapter 31 . 1/23
Nice ending, this is going in my favorites for sure.
Guntherson962 chapter 21 . 1/23
There are days I say "There is no way Jack is THAT clueless", but then I remember that Danny has to get it from somewhere.
Guntherson962 chapter 8 . 1/23
So quick question about Hatchwork, is he like some marionette that some how fell into the Ghost Zone (I do recall Frostbite saying something about portals opening naturally in his first apperence), or is he a marionette that his creator put his heart and soul into making and he came to life like the Baron from 'The Cat Returns'?
Arica chapter 19 . 12/14/2014
This is a really good story so far. I really enjoy it.
Guest chapter 21 . 12/12/2014
I was wondering could you write a sequal to this cool and unique story
marcusedwards411 chapter 31 . 10/29/2014
beautiful and entertaining
marcusedwards411 chapter 30 . 10/29/2014
juicy suspense intense hurt joy relieve um what else am i missing um
marcusedwards411 chapter 29 . 10/29/2014
the son is safe yet daughter is hurt
marcusedwards411 chapter 28 . 10/29/2014
ready! FIGHT!
marcusedwards411 chapter 27 . 10/29/2014
fight and get the babies back
marcusedwards411 chapter 26 . 10/29/2014
dont mess with the parents!
marcusedwards411 chapter 25 . 10/29/2014
now for Danny to ask Sam to marry him so she can be a completed member of his family and she would have his last name
marcusedwards411 chapter 24 . 10/29/2014
love is special
marcusedwards411 chapter 23 . 10/29/2014
soon they will be comfortable to see each other naked i mean since this wasn t planned for either one of them and they never was able to remember their first moment it would be obvious to see each other naked since they dont know what each other bodies look like under the clothes oh sorry for the repeated grammar
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