Reviews for Neko, Meet Crow and Vampire
hentai18ancilla chapter 8 . 1h
Poor Harry!
bakezorishoes chapter 7 . 10/3
just wanted to leave a helpful criticism, love LOVE the story by the way mostly fantabulous, but little things (such as wander as in 'I wander through the house' for example is misspelled every time I believe as 'wonderan interesting conundrum, 'wonder' how that happened lol) but until this chapter the edited chapters seemed to be well written and decently concise, I find however that this chapter is rather, ┬┐misplaced? the scenes have little warning or reason and the sex scene (while well written, congratulations!) was entirely random and unexpected. I went back and forth from chapter six to seven several times to see if I had missed something, it feels almost as though a whole chapter is missing. the reader (ME) feels as though I've missed out. There is no reasoning or expansion as to Harry's thoughts leading up to their official mating, also (angst monster and fluff glutton that I am) I'm sad and depressed that there was no expansion on the scars Harry has or how his prior abuse would have factored into his relationship, his possessive protective mates finding out about his treatment with the dursleys for example that kind of stuff feeds my hunger and makes me squeal it's my lifebloodand also very relevant to the theme and mood you have going here with your delightful fanfictionspeaking of what happened to the dursley family? they have dropped off the proverbial map so to speak- not that I overly mind) Draco as well suddenly showing up and the way in which you suddenly featured him is also unwarranted and shocking this chapter, there were no plans no letters before this appearance no updates no mention at all really as I stated before it feels as though many things happened that the reader (me hohohomissed out on and I really want to read it I'm loving it (ba da ba-ba-ba~ mcD*nald's) so I'm freaking out because I want this material I feel I'm missing I'm still unsure whether or not it's a technological error and I really am just missing a chapter, if so dang. officially the longest review I've ever written, it's 6 in the morning (your genius plot and awesom fanfiction here kept me up all night darn you) and if that's not the best compliment ever I don't know what is
blackbloodywolf chapter 8 . 7/27
great story really enjoyable
CandyTwink chapter 1 . 7/22
Did you just quote a bible verse in a yaoi fanfic? Or am i missing something?
tamashiyuki chapter 8 . 7/14
Very Very gooooooooooood!
Sly the gratsulover117 chapter 8 . 6/29
So, were they both the fathers to the twins? Like one twin was Kyoya ,and the other Umehito.
Or were they special and shared each fathers genes
Guest chapter 2 . 6/13
I like the story, but seriously? "it should be found in any Apothecary easily enough considering how vain women tended to be".?! That's one of the most sexist comments I've ever read. If you had left the out, this could have been one of my favorite stories. It's good though, I'll admit that. I just wish you had left that part out.
777angeloflove chapter 8 . 3/30
amenoshimai1 chapter 8 . 2/19
Ummm... nop
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 8 . 1/5
I really like it a lot! **
haydenkelley01 chapter 1 . 1/3
You made Neville longboat omg related to voldemort. ...
wechard chapter 8 . 12/16/2015
I noticed that Neville's mother's maiden name is Riddle. Now I just can't help but wonder what Tom and Neville's reactions would be, finding out that they are related. Especially when Tom finds out that his daughter is currently in St. Mungo's long-term care ward, due to being driven insane by the Cruciartus curse.
Elfin69 chapter 8 . 12/15/2015
Thank you for letting us know that they were edited and for updating again. So what is going on in Britain and does Molly and Dumbledore along with Ginny now realise that she is now out of the picture completely?
Elfin69 chapter 6 . 12/15/2015
So will Kyoya figure out why Harry does not want the Hosts coming to their home yet? I wonder how long before he figures out that he needs to grow up and actually treat Harry with respect.
Elfin69 chapter 5 . 12/15/2015
How will Harry react to what his two fianc├ę's want him to do and if they found a home for him?
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