Reviews for Before Byakuya's Scent Fades Away
xxXMythiaXxx chapter 1 . 7/8/2014
Grah...this was sad! :'( I'm surprised, actually. Togami Byakuya is truly a tsundere...But more tsun. But meh, I like tsunderes, and I suppose Fukawa Touko likes them too!

And Genocider Syo. Speaking of her, you nailed her personality! You've done it seemingly effortlessly, whilst I'm still trying to grasp her way of thinking. Though it's not that different from mine...

Sadist.

I enjoyed this one, thank you for writing it and uploading it! Very, very nice. :)

xxXMythiaXxx
Hannah chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
Fantastic! You really know the characters :)
I should be working chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
Superb writing! The characterization's wonderful, and the whole story just flows along very well.
kopycat101 chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
This is really well-written! Like, holy crap, it's an entire section of Fukawa and Togami goodness!
Ashbrie13 chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
"He can't save me from myself.
No one can."
That's totally dark. xD

This is actually really awesome. You captured their characters really well, good job. :D
Cottage chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
Really well written! I love how you portrayed Fukawa and Togami ...they were perfectly IC :D
I dunno if they'd make a good couple (obviously not) but I admire our Super High School Level Literary Girl for trying so much to have Togami's attentions! It hurts me, actually... T.T
You were talking about another Dangan Ronpa fanfiction, weren't you? Well, you have my full support! Just ... try not make us wait too long, 'kay? I miss the videogame, and your story might help me ease the pain ç_ç
Thanks a lot for writing this!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
Love it
The Lotus of Dawn chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
Hm .. I hope on your behalf that it was fun to write this story c:
Asami Sato chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
:)
111hungergames111 chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
Very nice! The characters were flawless. I thought I was reading from the LP itself. Poor Genocider... All she wants is his attention, and he hates her.
lunarisque chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
that title though oh my god

man i like how togami actually let fukawa let their 'date' go on for as long as it did. the bit where he went on about how he only agreed to it to avoid getting called and how he'd be the only one getting out was really great, and also fukawa is just so...fukawa. GOD BLESS monobear was perfect oh my god. and i just love how i recognise their dialogue in the beginning and the end—especially how you made it that togami lied about her sneezing back into her usual self.

and you'd better tell me about writing something on the year before the mutual killing started! god only knows how much they deserve that.
Arsenic chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
Wow this is really great

I liked hearing Touko's/Syo's opinions on the other guys, those were hilarious

[Naegi is so dull. It's a miracle that he's not dead yet.]

[That gothic lolita wench, Celestia.]

[The idiotic fortuneteller]

I wasn't really a fan of Touko when I was reading the LP, but you made me like her. It was nice to see things from her point of view. You made her obsession with Byakuya seem endearing. Good job.
Xandra Fox chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
This is great! I felt like this little "date" could have actually happened behind the scenes. Your characterization of these two was spot on, especially with the "aversion" to other people they share. There were several lines that made me laugh out loud, most of which came from Byakuya's mouth. XD Seriously, how can anyone not love that guy? He's hilarious! And the ending, while a bit depressing, was incredibly realistic. You really nailed that rollercoaster up and down feeling of liking a guy who doesn't like you back. And Touko's shyness around him was so cute! :)

Wonderful job. Looking forward to that cutsie perfect year series!