|Reviews for Life After Detainment|
| unearthing chapter 2 . 3/27
even the flashback in present tense?
| Sasusaku Uchiha chapter 18 . 3/9
Ooo! I really like this story and how it's going so far! Please take your time in updating! It always gets me excited when I get a notification about a story update after a while! Looking forward to your update. Keep up the amazing work! :)
| trueblue51 chapter 18 . 2/2
FIRST OFF LOVED THE STORY! SECOND GOOD FOR YOU I WOULD LOVE TO READ YOUR PUBLISHED WORK! AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I CANT WAIT EVEN THOUGH VALENTINES DAY IS IN SOME WEEKS! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!XD
| UchihaElle99 chapter 18 . 1/8
I did nanowrimo as well, it's awesome I finished with 113,000 words!
| Kieratdg chapter 18 . 1/6
Great story. Please update as soon as you can:-)
| abriel chapter 18 . 1/4
| 7HeartAndSoul7 chapter 18 . 1/4
Congrats on the start of your career! It must be a very exciting thing for you and I wish you the best of luck!
The selfish part of me will be impatient for updates haha but all of me is understanding :)
Do great! And always I love your stories and shall wait patiently for your new updates!
| Jacques Sparreaux chapter 6 . 1/3
I have to be honest. I read this because the premise caught my interest, but your writing style in the previous chapters was a snooze... not that it isn't interesting, it's just that it's too wordy! The characters' dialogues are alright, but your narrative isn't. I know you have artistic license to your work, I understand that, but I get the feeling you tried to be poetic or dramatic with your descriptions here, and it didn't go well for me. I mean like, I already got the point in the first sentence... then the paragraph drones on about it still... beats around the bush somewhat. I'm sorta doing that right now, but that's because I just wanna be explicit about my thoughts. This chapter is different though, maybe because it is a fight scene and going overboard with descriptive paragraphs doesn't matter since it intensifies the action, or maybe because you dropped the unnecessary wordiness. I did enjoy this one! It's fun to see Sakura pull a trick like that, and I really like where the story is headed. that's why I had to share my opinion about your writing, because I have the tendency to drop a story, no matter how exciting it is, if the writing doesn't live up to my expectations. I'd feel guilty and sorry to not know what happened at the end, but if I can't bear reading it, I just won't. I am not expert by any means. You'll find mistakes in my grammar and spelling, heck you'll say I'm a hypocrite if you read my fics, but I just want to be honest, this is a review after all, and I encourage honesty among those who review my work too. Sorry for the honest rant. I just had to let this out. I've put this story on my Alert list months ago, but got to reading it only now because all the other stories I've subscribed to haven't updated, and I really wanna continue reading this.
| hama431 chapter 18 . 1/3
| Alltogetherclueless chapter 18 . 1/3
Bless you, what a shame. I think it's awful that people put so much pressure on writers here to update. Like it's nice to know people want to read your work and enjoy it but you have a life and shit to do you know?!
Anyway I'm sure everyone is still with you, and congrats on the great opportunities you have coming up.
I've never been a beta before but I can certainly give it a bash, English is my first language and I have a lot of free time at the moment so give me a shout if you want me to look over things! xx
| makkyj13 chapter 18 . 1/3
If you still need someone to edit this, I can.
| Guest chapter 17 . 1/2
I just started reading this and was hoping that you would have been done in seventeen chapters but you are not :( so please update and finish the story, pretty please don't go completely ghost on us
| hama431 chapter 17 . 12/25/2013
Update the next chapter
| Guest chapter 17 . 12/3/2013
Please update,i love how sasuke is jealous to ,please update
| Sibrael chapter 17 . 11/26/2013
I like the story so far and am really interested to learn what unforgivable thing Kakashi said to Sakura. It is great to see a fic that addresses what kind of sensei Kakashi was to Sakura.