|Reviews for One Too Many|
| Vampy chapter 10 . 7/16
There's only one response/reaction appropriate for this fanfic:
| GingerRogers15 chapter 10 . 4/10/2016
Wow I cannot express my absolute love for this fic. Characterization and description were absolutely fantastic, and you danced perfectly on that fine line between humor and tragedy. Never once did the emotions overrun each other but they sort of bled into the next and made the whole thing flow smoothly. This was fantastic and I loved reading it. Excellent work.
| jedimaster91 chapter 10 . 3/1/2016
How did I miss this one?! XD Anakin should take Obi-Wan bar hopping more often. Then again, Obi-Wan drank Anakin under the table and still managed sufficient flair in the ensuing brawl, so maybe removing Obi-Wan's inhibitions enough to really cut loose isn't such a good idea.
As always, I love how you can tap dance on the line between hilarious and heart wrenching. All those subjects they "weren't talking about-at all, ever, by unspoken mutual consent" bubbling up even though they won't remember it in the morning certainly tugged at the heartstrings. And then in the next sentence they're blowing up the bar. In style, dangit, cuz Obi-Wan wouldn't settle for anything less.
And add me to the list of folks wondering about the first time Obi-Wan got blitzed. I bet it was hilarious and he didn't appreciate it one bit.
| Tricksterkat209 chapter 10 . 12/1/2014
This has been hilarious! My abs hurt so much because I couldn't stop laughing. Oh my, some lighthearted fun was a nice change of pace.
| chisscientist chapter 7 . 3/9/2014
Can't help but wonder where these two are going to end up, and in what shape.
| Meursault23 chapter 10 . 2/24/2014
Love this! Man wish this was an episode of TCW. Lol.
| Padawan Aneiki R'hyvar chapter 10 . 10/21/2013
ROFL oh this was just perfect. *snort* Obi up on the bar with the skylight falling *around* him...of course... ;) *chuckle* You do have a way with words.
And drunk Jedi. ;)
| Snootiegirl99 chapter 8 . 10/12/2013
I like this chapter. That is all.
| Snootiegirl99 chapter 7 . 10/12/2013
"It would be impolitic to suggest that the object of their mutual hero worship might have been a loony, but at the moment it certainly looked that way."
It's funny (as in strange) to me that Qui-Gon isn't discussed more between them in canon. There might be a fic in there for me. ;)
And I'll ask you, since it's rattling around in my head rit now. Why, oh why, did Liam have to look so completely disheveled the whole way through TPM? His tunics don't even fit properly and look like rags. Not the intrepid warrior Jedi I try to envision in the more 'romantic' of QO fics. Not sexy at all.
| Oh I am Slain chapter 10 . 9/25/2013
The attention to detail and quality of writing was fantastic, but it was the premise and humour that really made this story shine. Everything else just helped to augment the funniness by making the story plausible and unpredictable. I particularly liked how you even added in some serious moments to give the story emotional depth.
If anything, the main problem is that the story has just a one-shot feel to it, and it's hard to picture the story being as good if you went any longer than this. Or maybe that's just a sign that you wrapped it up very well.
Anyway, I hope you write more humorous / crack-ish stories like this. Cheers!
| Jinx chapter 10 . 8/15/2013
Just one too many? Twelve too many. And here I thought the Jedi were all so terribly restrained. I may never watch the scene in the Outlander with the same eyes again.
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/28/2013
Wonder what the first time when obi wan was blitzed was
| Eldar-Melda chapter 10 . 7/15/2013
Anakin and Obi-wan need to talk a lot, a lot about their pasts even though they aren't ready to do so. Anakin nevers talks about his mother,, his slavery and Tatooine, Obi-wan about his own past, Qui-gon and Satine. It's hard for both to open up like that.
But you did a good job at this opening up and I just hoped Anakin would slip out something about Padmé and him yet no. But when you mentionned Padmé, we can see Anakin can't really bear seeing her being in danger at all.
| Nanuk chapter 3 . 6/13/2013
"One of us is a General, Anakin. The other is a general nuisance."
Hahaha, gosh, I love it when he (well, you ;) ) does that!
| anonymous chapter 10 . 5/21/2013
brilliant story as always. Thank's so much for a good read before finals!
and you taught me some latin too while you were at it!
your vocabulary is just so advanced, I literally have to keep a dictionary next to me to decipher what you are sayiing.
If i could write like you i'm pretty darn sure i would ace my english finals.
Caveat lector does mean reader beware, correct?
thank you again for the great story!