|Reviews for Bits of Sunshine|
| Guest chapter 11 . 19h
Jeremy and kol
| gvgyguj chapter 29 . 3/20
great story, thank you. will clarissa get pregnant? damon will be a great father ;) elena should get pregnant too :) please continue
| CarrotTop chapter 30 . 1/22
This is probs the fifth time ive reread this story in the almost four years you havent updated and i wanna say that even tho you haven't finished, this is my favourite fic and will probably continue to be my favourite fic out of the hundreds ive read. Its really refreshing to get a funny fic when their are so many angsty ones in the tvd fandom and im really grateful for the laughs and smiles youve put on my face. BTW im totally sucking up to you for an update ;D
But seriously, i hope your alright. I hope the last 3-4ish years have been good to you cause you deserve the same happiness you bring me. (I know this sounds really sappy but its 3 in the morning and im tired and emotional)
Thanks for writing
From an obsessed and concerned fan )
| Guest chapter 30 . 1/21
The only thing I hate about this great story is that Damon is abusive to her physically, emotionally and mentally -thank God not sexually as well. And she doesn't seem to mind. This sends a dangerous and horrible message be him a vampire or not. There's a difference between a bad boy and a bad person. A bad boy is dangerous in a fun mischievous way. While a bad person actually hurts you and Damon does. In canon he's also abusive -as when he threatens to break Elena's arm- but not to this extent. Any self respecting woman would think a million times about even befriending him knowing what we know, and yet Clary has no problem even after he abuses her physically, emotionally and mentally by controling her mind to get her to act the way he wants and humiliate her by telling her to slap herself! She just takes it all without a second thought and it makes her pathetic and sends a horrible message to people that such behaviors is acceptable. And yes he's a vampire and this is a fictional world with different rules but even within those rules and this world what he's doing is abusive and the least Clary should do is permeantly break up with him and either remain single or get with someone that respects her -something that's more important than just love.
| NellieWolf123 chapter 8 . 1/3
this is so my humor! It's the best story I've ever read, no lie! (unlike the cake)
| Saiyaa chapter 30 . 12/30/2017
| xxxicecreamluvxxx chapter 10 . 12/18/2017
As far as Jeremy goes, I really reckon he and Kol should end up together. xD don't ask me why cause I ain't got an answer
| Japkot chapter 30 . 12/16/2017
You underestimate my patience :D
Even if it has been kinda 3 years.
| LPWomer chapter 30 . 12/3/2017
This is God’s gift to the universe, but has been spoiled by the hell that is unfinished fanfiction.
| Literal Dark Lord chapter 30 . 11/3/2017
this story has literally become all that I need in my life. this is my 4th read through and i absolutely llve the way you portray all the characters. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Kayumeee chapter 16 . 10/22/2017
Your story is different from ones I've read. Surprisingly, I end up laughing out loud at the funny parts. I'm not really a person that like multi OC in one story because I don't remember add on characters really well. But I still end up reading because I want the happy ending. Until I realized how long it's been since you've lasted updated! Life really has its grasp on you. Hope you're well. Please. One day, finish this story.
Even if not, don't delete it. (I had one really good one. And she deleted it :/)
| TheSlayerofGallifrey chapter 30 . 10/20/2017
I effing love this story soooo much! I've read a lot of fanfiction from different fandoms, and this is definitely in my top 3 favs. I've come back and re-read this story so many times now.
Clarissa is just so freaking funny and interesting. Kudos on making an Original Character that is more entertaining than all the canon characters. Plus, I love the way you took the VD's plot and completely made it your own. I get so bored of reading stories where the author basically copies the script, and just changes some of the dialogue.
You have a real gift for writing and I hope that even if you never return to finish this story, you find other outlets for your talent! Cheers!
| 7134 chapter 29 . 9/20/2017
I wanted to thank you for this amazing/hilarious/beautiful work of fanfic art! I'm glad that you've decided to not turn Clarissa into a vampire. If you were looking for a Supernatural fic idea, why not have the OC be Mary Winchester's goddaughter whose father dies on a hunt, mother supposed died in childbirth (according to dad). John takes girl in (she usually does research & isn't allowed to go hunting). Sam leaves for Stanford, & when Dean brings him back into the fold, Sam realizes how much OC has changed/grown up. Cue Sam being in denial about crushing on her.
| CrimsonSurvivor chapter 30 . 8/15/2017
D: D: ?! SERIOUSLY?!
| friendofSirDidymus chapter 30 . 8/7/2017
Oh my gosh I laughed so hard at parts of this story I can't even
This is awesome and you are awesome and even if you don't come back to this story for another few years please come back to it eventually :)