Reviews for Maybe Next Time He'll Think |
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![]() ![]() Honestly Edward is an asshole.. Who sees a drunk and distressed woman and fucks her? Obviously Bella was not thinking clearly. At the very least he should have taken her somewhere to calm down, drink some water. After that what happens happens. But the fact that he started talking dirty and treat her like a piece of meat is not on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loaded chapter. I loved the guessing game the E name. Love it thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I laughed so hard this last chapter! It was hilarious! Uncle Seth is never babysitting again, lmao! I gotta say, I freaking loved the entire thing. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this! "Are you fucking kidding me?!" lmfao! So yes, while the lemons were hot, Ryder and Seth absolutely stole the show! I also want to comment on Chapter 1 that AliceEmmett were total selfish, self-important, privileged assholes. And imbeciles trying to pass the buck on Bella. If it wasn't for the fact that the description said "Edward" I definitely would've assumed it was Edward who did her dirty. Overall, loved the whole piece and would love it if you say, one day, revisited the brood and gave us updates on everyone! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gosh I laughed! This was FUNNY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapter 3 never fails to leave me laughing uncontrollably! Every kid needs an Uncle Seth! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was such a cute story! The writing format was really interesting too :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bwaahaahaa! Seth is a mess! So much for a horizontal weekend! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL! "You just wait until Claire pops, man. I'm going to feed your kid full of chocolate, spin it around, then stand back and watch while it barfs all over you." Too funny! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oooh you had me there for a minute. nicely done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so good. I wish there was another update on Emmett and Alice though. |
![]() ![]() Man this was a funny disaster to watch unfold. Lol. |
![]() ![]() Awe I read this story forgetting that this was an Edward and Bella. I was hoping that E was Edward and not Emmett. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And so disaster continues! After this, I assume Bella and Edward will wait till their kids are adults before leaving again! ;) Thanks so much for a good laugh! |