Reviews for El Camino |
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![]() ![]() ![]() All I can say is WOW! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of my favorite stories, and one I often revisit. Perfection. Swoon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This whole story was perfection! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really really beautiful, thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Definitely not fluffy. Raw and exposed; bittersweet. Thanks for sharing. xo |
![]() ![]() I literally hate every author who writes Bella as such a pushover but Edward is automatically a “romantic” for fucking other women while being hung up on Bella. It’s a no for me. |
![]() ![]() Love love love love love this! It definitely deserved to be a finalist, you're a talented writer. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Daaamn you can write. What an amazing one shot. I might need a few hours to get rid of the feels you just gave me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I almost loved this. My heart broke for Bella, when Edward decided to have sex with Tanya and ignore Bella. How is that love? She remained single and a virgin waiting for him, while he ignored her for a whore. He never even answered her when she asked him if he had sex with Tanya. How could he love Bella, and yet have an intimate relationship with someone else? No wonder Bella had no clue about his affections. I just wish she would have gone out with Emmett or Embry and lost her virginity to one of them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know you wrote this a long time ago, but just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed it. It was absolutely beautiful to read. It was also quite heartbreaking. Thank you so much for sharing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a fabulous story! Thank you for writing and sharing! |
![]() ![]() I didnt think it was really romantic...edward didnt treat bella nicely. He gave her mixed signals and was a manwhore with tanya while she did nothing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I seriously don't get tired of this. Love it more every time. |