|Reviews for The Beach House|
| shellshock81 chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
your writing is like a shot through the heart! except you give boy love an epicheartfailbeforeyoupatchmeallupagain name.
If that's not as funny as I think it is, please don't tell me. I'm dying lol'ing right now.
Seriously tho! Loved this. I wanted to shove Jasper's face in the sand when he actually left. And then trip Edward when he got back from his run and tried to leave Jasper. Such a great ride for so few words, bb. I really loved it! THe ILY's and the "You told them about us?" PERFECT!
I need to pay better attention to your timeline... I didn't even realize you'd submitted an entry for this!
Love your face... xoxo
| Lisa-FanFicCrazy chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
OMG I LOVED it so much! I was a little scared at the beginning.. Lovely! Thanks for sharing!
| MinaRivera chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
This was my favorite entry. Thank you so much for writing. xo Mina
| sue273 chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
Oh, this is a fabulous story, Karen. Love your boys, their hot loving and the subtle angst portrayed between them. Definitely a feel good story, beautifully written as always.
| Mgg1606 chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
This is wonderful honey! I started reading it yesterday, but many thing happen and I just couldn't seem to find the time to finish it, and then this morning something really sad happened to us *a family pet died* and I just thought this will cheer me up, and yes, it totally did, thanks and I hope everyone out there finds love no matter the odds and no matter the person... **smooches** :')
| addicted-to-romione-bedward chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
This story was so beautiful! for a second there, I feared Jasper won't return.
And the end...wow. I'm in tears, but I'll blame that on pmsing. :)
| Soulmate Ficwriter chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
What an amazing story! I loved it from the first word to the last! You are such a beautiful writer! Each phrase eloquent and perfect. Loved your descriptions of your boys. Their
| Poppyanna chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
I read this as part of the contest but didn't get a chance to read many of the others so I didn't vote, as I didn't think it fair :(
I loved it Karen, particularly when Jasper came back, it took my breath away. In addition, the ending was just perfect :)
| LexV chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Breaking the kiss with a grunt, Edward leaned forward to press his mouth to Jasper's ear. "I'm gonna take you so high," he said, his breaths hot and fast. that was hot!
I CRIED THOUGH! WTH! I wasn't ready.
You are an amazing writer so talented. Thank you for writing this wonderfully hot story with tears and laughter wrapped together to make a brilliant story!
| cherryhilz chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
| Alterite chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
I absolutely loved this story when it was published in the TwiHEA Contest. The only M/M story, it was the undebatable proof that love is love and doesn't care for who you are and social conventions.
It was perfect! Swoony, a bit of drama, a touch of angst, a real plot, a really believable not-simplistic HEA, and characters I fell in love with got it my vote and the top mark in my own personal sytem to keep track of how much I liked every entry.
I'm going to thoroughly enjoy reading the rest of what you've written!
| modunk chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Loved this. I think it was my favorite of the entries I read.
| Jayme TyZane chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
I'm swooning over this, woman! It was hot, it was sweet, and it brought a chill to my bones and a tear to my eye. Good job!
| chele the original chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
| lellabeth chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
ALL THE HAPPY TEARS. Beautiful, beautiful story. I'm so glad I knew there was going to be a HEA at the end, because some parts made me throat tight. I read this when it was posted on the contest page but as a fellow entrant couldn't comment, so I'm thankful you posted it to your own account. This was touching, and wonderful, and I'm so happy you shared it.