|Reviews for The Beach House|
| modunk chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Loved this. I think it was my favorite of the entries I read.
| Jayme TyZane chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
I'm swooning over this, woman! It was hot, it was sweet, and it brought a chill to my bones and a tear to my eye. Good job!
| chele the original chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
| lellabeth chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
ALL THE HAPPY TEARS. Beautiful, beautiful story. I'm so glad I knew there was going to be a HEA at the end, because some parts made me throat tight. I read this when it was posted on the contest page but as a fellow entrant couldn't comment, so I'm thankful you posted it to your own account. This was touching, and wonderful, and I'm so happy you shared it.
| buffbronze chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Perfect perfect O/S sweetie. My heart just broke for Edward trying to be brave as Jasper was leaving..ugh!
I knew Jasper wouldn't be able to stay away...i mean who could leave Edward right? lol
So brave of them both though, to come out and just live their lives.
| Emeralds in Penombra chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Can your stories be any more amazing? I think not. Loved, loved, loved this story. My favorite kind...the kind where you don't know what's going to happen, but hope & pray it all has a happy ending. :):) Loved your Jasper in this. You NEED to write more E&J (big eyes...please). You know how much I love your stories...one of your biggest fans. Thank you darlin. xoxoxo
| maryhell chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Of all the entries, yours was my favourite. It has everything I love in a story. Brilliantly written too.
| dragontattoo75 chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
This was so wonderful, I really loved it! Thank you!
| HeartOfDarkess chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
ooh what a lovely story! thank you for sharing hun xxx
| beanothercullen chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
I LOVED this story . Great job!
| BethMasenCullen chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
Hi! I saw this link on FB and I am so glad I checked it out! Beautiful story!
| TD69 chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
I love this story!
| harrytwifan chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
I KNEW this one was yours! I just knew it! Brilliant story, babe. I voted for it - and not just cuz it was the only slash. I really loved it. Great job.
| cejsmom chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
I think this was the first entry I read and I was blown away. I totally was rooting for his return even knowing it was an hea you wrote it brilliantly cuz it felt like it was over. I only read a few entries and even worked on one but to me, of all of the ones I read this was the only true hea. It got my vote. Awesome job Karen, you wrote a beautiful and amazing story.
| OcSickGirl chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
I should have known this was yours. I absolutely loved this one. Broke my heart and then I swooned when you pieced it back together. I love these two. :)