|Reviews for Simba and Kovu's dark seceret|
| Bobshin chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
That was hilarious.
| girl chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
| Eddie chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
One of the best TLK story i have ever read plz make more thanks! :)
| petitprincess chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
It was pretty good; there were some bad things and there were some good things. I guess I'll start with the good: 1) You still kept the anger between Kovu and Simba, and still made it show that they're great friends no mater what. 2) you kept the story hilarious! And 3) It was cute. Now the bad things: 1) There was a little too much cursing. I know my stories curse to but it's not wall to wall cursing. 2) You made Kovu stupid. Now yes he is stupid at times, but mostly he acts because he's childish and he likes joking a lot. And 3) The story was kind of hard to read and there wasn't that much detail in it. Try spacing the paragraphs out more, instead of making it one long paragraph. Also, if a characters talking try making a new paragraph with that. Overall, it was pretty good, better than what I would've done. Hope to see more stories!