Reviews for Ana and Christian - Having A Baby
Bonitapplebumm chapter 3 . 4/20/2013
Wow that was incredible! It all happened so fast in the book, I love the way you extended every part of it. The multiple POVs really help and the crazy Elizabeth part was kinda scary, another Homerun ...I am with Elliot, CG's security sucks first Leila gets into the apartment and then they let Ana give them the slip somebody needs to be fired!
newgirl3366 chapter 3 . 4/20/2013
So full of emotion and heartbreak. The way you wrote Christian during the scene after hydes attack was so good.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
Good job. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon.
LisaGC chapter 2 . 4/20/2013
Thanks so much for doing the baby story. Loved the line about no sex until the baby is driving. Poor Christian.
Joann41 chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
You are an amazing writer...I loved loved your first story looking forward to this one. , great so far!
Karen. Kaz chapter 2 . 4/20/2013
Just found your new story and read both chapters... Loving already , as I knew I would.. CG knows he has cocked up majorly.. Love his relationship with Elliot, brings out a whole new side to him.. Can't wait for more...
joyosix chapter 2 . 4/20/2013
Go Elliott! Best line ever! Can't wait for more! Jo6
cec0020 chapter 2 . 4/19/2013
I am LOVING Elliot! Can't wait for more! Thanks for writing
Guest chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Can't wait to watch the grandfather say told you so because he said he wasn't worried because he could keep his hands off her. Still loving the relationship between the brothers thanks
Sunshirae chapter 2 . 4/19/2013 almost had me wailing with the last two lines. I just love how you have shown the connection between Christian and Elliot you really let me see their heart and soul in your words. Wow...adoptive brother's more connected than blood or DNA. It is a welcome and a pleasure to read your material...thank you for your time and for your writing.
team harris chapter 2 . 4/19/2013
Yayyy. Another awesome chapter. Loved the conversation between Elliot and Christian!
princessrolon chapter 2 . 4/19/2013
Again another brilliant chapter. Christian can be an ass sometimes, but we love him so :)
kari0942 chapter 2 . 4/19/2013 good...plz update!...3
princessrolon chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
So happy he told Elena off, man i hate her. Elliott was brilliant too. Let's just hope Christian can get his wife back , and Elliott doesn't have to kick his ass. Great chapter
blondegirl3 chapter 2 . 4/19/2013
Laughed so hard at this... You are either a fucking barbarian or one dumb ass mother fucker who knows nothing about women. I am telling you; no I am begging you, if you want to make up with your wife dumbass, the sex comes after the apology not before. Jesus Christ! ... Too flipping funny! Loved this chapter! I had forgotten so much of what happened! And the good stuff that is coming! Yeah!
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