I just loved this chapter about Ana and Christian and the kids...especially loved the SUPER DADDY that Christian has become...I still hated that BITCH CARLA...what a bitch what she said about Christian in front of his children...I wish someone would BITCH SLAP that creep of a woman...I LOVED LOVED LOVED THE LAST PART WHERE THE CHILDREN WROTE ANA AND CHRISTIAN THE LETTERS OF APPRECIATION FOR THEIR FANTASTIC SUMMER VACATION AND ALL OF THE THINGS THAT THEY LEARNED AND LOVED AND THAT THEY GAINED AN APPRECIATION FOR THEIR AMAZING COUNTRY AND THEIR AMAZING PARENTS...ANA AND CHRISTIAN ARE WONDERFUL PARENTS...ONE PART THAT I ESPECIALLY LOVED LOVED LOVED WAS WHEN CHRISTIAN LAYED DOWN WITH HENRY TO COMFORT HIM AND ASSURED HIM THAT THEY WERE ALL SAFE AND THE TENDER WAY CHRISTIAN RAN HIS HAND THROUGH HENRY'S HAIR AND HENRY HELD HIS 9 years old hand up to Christian's large hands...and Christian talking to Henry being silly and loving to his son and Ana watching Christian and saying to herself.."I CAN'T HELP THINKING THIS IS THE MAN WHO QUESTIONED WHAT KIND OF FATHER HE COULD POSSIBLY BE AND HERE HE WAS BEING THE BEST MOST WONDERFUL FATHER IN THE WORLD IN MY OPINION!" I JUST BAWLED MY EYES OUT...I CRIED IN MULTIPLE PLACES IN THIS CHAPER!
LILLY YOU ARE THE MOST WONDERFUL WRITER IN THE WORLD...I LOVE YOUR STORIES ABOUT CHRISTIAN AND ANA AND THE FAMILY WAYYYYYYYYYY BETTER THAN THE ORIGINAL BOOKS BY E L JAMES...ORIGINAL FIFTY SHADES...BUT IF IT WASN'T FOR HER ORIGINAL CHRISTIAN GREY YOUR STORY WOULDN'T HAVE AS MUCH MEANING AND THE HUMOR IT DOES..I LOVE YOUR HUMOR IN THE STORIES...I LOVE HOW YOU HAD CHRISTIAN HEALING ...YOU EVEN REDEEMED KATE IN THIS CHAPTER. IN MY EYE...WHICH I HATED HER CHARACTER IN THE BOOKS...THOUGHT WAS BIGGEST BITCH..BUT EVEN SHE HAS GROWN UP AND BECOME A BETTER PERSON A FRIEND TO ANA AND CHRISTIAN...IT WAS YAR YAR YAR YAR! THE BEST VACATION...THE MOST WONDERFUL FAMILY...LOVE CHRISTIAN AND ANA AND THE CHILDREN...LOVE TAYLOR AND GAIL ...SAWYER AND THE OTHER SECURITY GUYS...THEY HAVE ALL BECOME ONE BIG HAPPY FAMILY...LOVED TAYLOR'S HUMOR! IN THE ORGINAL BOOKS HE WAS SO STOIC AND TOOK SO MUCH SHIT FROM CHRISTIAN...I WAS SO HAPPY THAT CHRISTIAN LET UP ONE HIM AND MADE HIM BECOME A FRIEND TO HIM AND TAYLOR AND GAIL BECOMING GAGA AND TAY TAY! LOVE YOU LILLY...I HOPE ALL IS WELL WITH YOU...CAN'T SEEM TO FIND ANYTHING ABOUT YOUR WELL BEING...I HOPE YOU ARE OKAY...PLEASE BE OKAY...I HOPE YOU AND YOUR OWN FAMILY ARE WELL AND HAPPY...I KNOW THAT THIS STORY REFLECT MUCH OF YOUR OWN FAMILY LIFE ...YOU ARE A WONDERFUL WRITER...LOVE YOU!

Love the wya you wrote everyone

Fantastic story is there any more chapters to come

I read this story so long ago and read it many many times. How is it that I never posted a review it's beyond me. This was my first and favorite fanfic. Is it okay for me to beg you to get back to writing. Please come back and share this wonderful gift you have. Please!

What a Chapter I can't see it for crying.

Christian Grey didn't do the girlfriend thing either and look at him now! Luke Sawyer is sooo funny doing background checks on Francesca potential dates...Luke is sooo into her!

I have to tell you that i jave read all 3 books from Christian by E.L James i was so disapointed in them, thats why i continue to read you books over and over, they are more cannon story llines and progress in am

Kate is always over reacting and makes everything about her. Her being hysterical in the courtroom..She is the biggest BITCH...I have never liked her character. I felt bad for Mia...In your story I always wondered if the stress and the drugs and dirty syringes that Hyde used to inject her with the Rohypnol had something to do with her cancer. What do you think.
I loved the save that Ana did in her testimony after Hydes lawyer trapped her into the delusional slip up that Ana said. I loved how Gramps supported Ana an while she was on the stand and how Ana simply adores Gramps...soooooooo Sweet. LOVE HOW CHRISTIAN HAS TURNED OUT TO BE SUPER DAD TO TEDDY...LOVVVVVVVVVVE YOUR CHRISTIAN OF ALL OF THE CHRISTIANS ON ANY OF THE FANFICTION STORIES AND THE ORGINAL E L JAMES BOOKS ALTHOUGH JAMES DID A PRETTY GOOD JOB OF DOING CHRISTIAN AT THE END OF FIFTY SHADES FREED AND FREED BOOKS...AFTER ALL OF CHRISTIAN'S ABUSE SELF HATRED, ELENAS PEDOPHILIA MOLESTING HIM I JUST BAWLED LIKE A BABY AT HIS DEVELOPMENT INTO A REALLY LOVING MAN, HUSBAND AND FATHER...YEAH! FROM THE BEGINNING OF THE FIFTY SHADES OF GREY AND GREY BOOKS...CHRISTIAN WAS LOOKING LIKE A REAL PRICK BUT AS HIS PAST ABUSE BY THE PIMP CAME OUT DURING HIS TERRIFYING NIGHT TERRORS I STARTED TO REALLY ROOTING FOR HIM...BUT REALLY SOME OF THE TIMES HE WAS A REAL DORK ESPECIALLY HIS INABILITY TO SEE ELENA LINCOLN FOR THE PEDOPHILE THAT SHE WAS BUT THAT IS WHAT PEDOPHILES DO..THEY BRAINWASH THEIR VICTIMS AND SHE REALLY HAD CHRISTIAN WRAPPED IN A SINISTER WEB OF HER EVIL...SHE WAS A TRULY EVIL EVIL EVIL PERSON...DEVIL INCARNATE! IN ONE OF THE FANFICTION STORIES I THINK IT WAS LIVING A DOUBLE LIFE...ONE OF ELENA'S VICTIMS SAID IT REALLY WELL ..EVEN THE DEVIL WOULDN'T WANT THE BITCH...AND THEN HE SAID THAT HE HAD NO FEAR OF THE HELL OR THE DEVIL BECAUSE HE HAD FUCKED HIS (THE DEVIL'S SISTER...

I hate Kate...SHE IS A FUCKING BITCH! i DON'T BUY THE DEPO SHOT IS ALL THAT IS WRONG WITH KATE...SHE HAS BEEN A BITCH ALL OF HER LIFE...SHE IS A SPOILT LITTLE FUCKING CUNT! I WISH Eliot would dump Kate...he deserves someone much better than the fucking Bitch Kate!

I'm sure you have room for many more! I've been reading your stories forever and they're the best 're the best

Really good Worldbuilding

I absolutely loved Ted and Gen’s story and their chemistry and even their individual characterisation. They really have a fluid and interesting chemistry. Awesome!

Henry of course your father gonna react like he did the fact that a old hag is fucking his son that could use him you father will always look out for you maybe all his children should learn about what there father went though in his early 4 years and what he went though with that hornless bitch to understand there father and why he has trouble letting go of control

Ana the way your acting is your taking your husband for granted then your acting too fucking friendly with the fucker the way your acting your fucking him making your husband schedule a date night with you that your probably canceling for that fucker that you seam to care more about then your husband if you don’t smarten up you could lose him and how would you feel if a woman did same thing with Christian that that guy did to you you would be pissed

Kate if you were really loyal you would not want fucking male strippers but you wanted make strippers to fuck you been treating your man like shit since you found out Ana was pregnant then saying mean things to his family so no your not loyal