Ana your a stupid bitch when it comes to men’s attention and the fact that that fucking cream that you call a friend forced himself onto you , and you still think he’s your fucking friend , and Ana how would you react if you have a daughter around your age and a man she thought was her friend forced himself onto her would you want her to still be around that man no so why are you doing that

Kate the fact that you want to go to fucking night clubs that are for 20 year olds that are single and want to fuck around then you want to dance like a whore that wants to get fucked then get mad at your fiancé when he don’t think you should dance like a whore and I bet it wasn’t Ana idea to go clubbing but yours cuz in her state she can’t fully do what you can if by chance someone gave her a drink and it has alcohol that can hurt her baby and it’s would like you only give a fuck about your self not him or anyone else

I loved loved loved this chapter...well all of the chapters...I really loved your version of this story more than I did E. original books...I loved the humor between Christian and Elliot the most and the humor of Teddy, Henry and especially Caleb...I thought Phoebe was a little Bitch...but basically a good kid...Christian truly created a monster daughter...with his over indolence but he loved his baby girl so much and was such a WONDERFUL father to all of his children...I LOVED YOUR CHRISTIAN OF ALL THE CHRISTIANS IN FANFICTION AND E. L. JAMES...This chapter of the wedding renewal ceremony had me weeping ...I loved their original wedding...another weeping tender story...I JUST LOVE YOUR WRITING...i REALLY LOVED THE HUMOR YOU INFUSED IN THIS STORY...BOTH AFTER THE BOATHOUSE AND ANA AND CHRISTIAN HAVE A BABY...CALEBS STORY LACKED THE HUMOR OF YOUR FIRST TWO STORIES...WISH YOU WOULD HAVE ADDED A DIFFERENT ENDING TO CALEBS PATH...WISH YOU WOULD HAVE HAD INFUSED MORE CHRISTIAN AND ANA IN THAT STORY...BUT OVERALL IT WAS GOOD ALSO...LILLY WHERE ARE YOU...ARE YOU STILL AROUND...I HOPE YOU ARE WELL...! THANK YOU FOR SUCH LOVELY WRITING AND STORIES...GOD BLESS YOU FOR BRINGING THESE WONDERFUL CHARACTERS TO LIFE IN SUCH HEARTFELT WAYS...ALL OF THE CHARACTERS...EVEN BITCHY KATE AND THE BIITCH TROLL...OH I HATE THAT BITCH! I THOUGHT YOU DID AN EXCELLENT JOB OF GIVING HER CANCER THAT LITERALLY ATE HER UP AND KILLED HER IN A GRUSOME WAY...ALTHOUGH EVEN THIS WAS WAY TOO GOOD AND END FOR HER! I WISH YOU WOULD WRITE MORE FIFTY SHADES STORIES...!i i AM STILL OBSESSED WITH THESE CHARACTERS CHRISTIAN AND ANA..AND ELLIOT AND THE KIDS!

Can’t stand Roach… I wonder why he was never held accountable as a manager about the assaults Hyde and Elizabeth committed under his watch. Sure Elizabeth was HR head but he was her superior. I wish Christian would have put this question to him as he wants to tout about a three-ring circus the job has become.

Jesslyn needs to be locked away! She's clearly loony

I just love this author . You are so funny ...you just crack me up. I laugh so much thank you for your humor and making laugh and release endorphin

Mia has ALWAYS been a money and attention hungry socialite bitch! Doesn't seem that has changed... Any other person would have left her ass a long time ago

Timmi is a little bitch.. first going on another date when you are seeing someone.. two timing!
And she told Henry previously she can handle press but now does not want to..

Mia always seemed to be after Christians money and guess that still hasn't changed..

Beautiful thoughtful Christian. A man of his word.

Hi Lily
Thank you for writing such a great story, very entertaining. I would have loved to hear what Mctierna's real intentions were, but I understand that's not the direction you are going. Anyway, thanks again for a great story

I know you wrote this a long time ago, but if you still read reviews or alerts, I wanted to post. This chapter is poignant and lovingly written. It truly captures the grief and emotions a family goes thru when dealing with the loss of a patriarch or matriarch, whose legacy will be multigenerational. So well done and a real tribute to EL James characters.

Thought they had a playroom in their house and he didn't want to bring Ana there because of bad memories with the others. Why isn't he doing anything about Aubrey?

No matter how many times I read this story I fall in love with it all over. But still didn't like they had to pay off Logan's brother it was self defense shod have gone to court instead. I remember what will happen to Ted and after Caleb

Story supposed to have ended but I am only reading this at end of 2022 and it is already 2023, but more chapters to read. The last part of this chapter celebration of Christian and Ana 25th wedding anniversary as a closure but I sure had a laugh with Caleb’s innocent banter with his brothers. Thank you very much, Lilly.