Reviews for Kataang : The Proposal
Guest chapter 4 . 8/29/2015
apoi se intalneste cu mama ei kia iin spune la fel apoi sa trezeste si ii povesteste lui suki apoi haotarat sa merga la palat apoi vorbeste cu aang si se paca ia povestit tot ce sa intamplat dar ia la iertat pentru cererea cu onji sa sarutul pasionaal dansul inbraciseri aceste ce afacut aang afost deore onji ia pus drog in bautura si lui aang ia separe cu kara apoi sa trezit din drog sa dat seama ce afacut afugi dupa katara agasito pana la urma si de abea sau inpacat acum este mai atent o rasfata si sun fericitii a jurat ca onji nu se mai bage intreiei si sadat seama cea vut si cea pierdut noroc ca areussit so recucereasca sa dat seama ca katara avea dreptat ii spuse mai inaite ca onji in vrea ca tot ce azi minte si cuzatile fals depre kara dar aang na crezuto fiinca onji adus devezi false dar dupa ceva timp auzit discutie cu onji apoi sa dat seama katara avea dreptate ii era tema casa nu o piarda pe kara dar apoi la iertat katara .acum o rasfata entru ca se simnte vinovat acum ii face o supri de zi nastere intarziata ca de ziua ei aang ia frant inima sa sarutat cu onji ia dat ei cadoul pentru kara acum inceara sa ii vindece inima ranita sufletul rup bucat fasiat frannt acum su feriiti bine mersi sfarsit
Guest chapter 4 . 7/19/2015
Cant wait till you continue this story when you do I would love to see if whatI predicted was true about what's gonna happen in the story, then I will be able to do anything BWAHAHAAA! Any way hope you conribute the story and I really enjoyed it well because my login doesn't work I will tell you my name...don't know why I just feel like it :) my name is Rylee Doran and I really enjoyed your story
her chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
using punctuation to end sentences would be nice. There's lots of run-ons.
Abbystar58 chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
I read all da chapter and couldn't help but notice that you have ALOT of runnon sentences and bearly any periods. Though your story is detailed it isn't desciptive and I know this is going to sound so rude but I will speak my opoinion anyways it is in a way poorly written the plot/ idea is amazing I Luv it! But there r lots if commas to where it looked like it was written by a 7 year
Guest chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
Great plot!
Please keep it going (:
Wiechcheu1925 chapter 2 . 4/17/2013
This chapter is a carbon copy of the last chapter (in a digital sense.)