Reviews for A Working Title: Part Two
Cardamoms3 chapter 31 . 4/22
This whole notion of domestic discipline is obviously patriarchal. And the way you write it seems fine because the women know its kind of messed up, but forbear it for their awesome men. But, Edward's use of it has been flawed and arbitrary across two books so far. I hope that he this will get addressed in the next book - not just this messed up incident but all of edward's arbitrary use of violence.

Other than that, I love reading this story. The characters are really vibrant.
MsLiss chapter 15 . 3/31/2016
Bella should tell Edward the full on flirting and crude jokes are the reason she reacted
I'm sure he won't listen but she should still tell him
Bevey99 chapter 2 . 5/18/2015
Think it was the 18th annual SAG awards in 2013.
Knit Bug chapter 31 . 3/12/2015
Gah! This was a hard read, but I totally could see it come to this due to your foreshadowing in the first part... now on to part three...

motherbeatrice chapter 3 . 2/22/2015
good for her...he's too controlling...
GorGirl chapter 31 . 10/20/2014
He definitely went too far. I almost hope that they don't get back together.
GorGirl chapter 16 . 10/20/2014
Go Rose!
GorGirl chapter 14 . 10/19/2014
I wonder if Garrett was behind Embray and Bella parting?
GorGirl chapter 11 . 10/19/2014
I hate the spankings.
GorGirl chapter 10 . 10/19/2014
Poor Bella.
GorGirl chapter 8 . 10/19/2014
Friggin Garrett.
GorGirl chapter 3 . 10/19/2014
Go Bella!
GorGirl chapter 2 . 10/19/2014
Emmett is a good friend.
Jalesia chapter 15 . 10/14/2014
It really astounds me how much of a brat Bella is. She acts like she is a 14 year old pubescent female with her attitude problems. She knew what she was getting into when she dated a celebrity. So startup acting so Vichy about paparazzi. Deal with it. Stop pouting like a child or throwing tantrums, put on your big girl panties and grow the fuck up...

Great story tho lol. Written very well...
lemonbutt chapter 31 . 9/26/2014
I'm not saying she deserves it but just as bella has her meltdowns and breaking points edward has his.
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