Reviews for Initiation
Gamma Orionis chapter 1 . 4/17/2013


I think it should go without saying that I loved this A LOT. The details about the initiation (the pain, the public-ness...) were suitably distressing in the best way possible, and Rabastan's interest and arousal by him a little later was... mmmmm ;)

Rabastan's pride in himself at the very end made me grin - congratulations to him for getting initiated ;D

Thank you so very much for writing this! I *heart* you :D :D :D
yellow 14 chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Not sure killing those who fail would work, but nicely written. Keep writing