Reviews for Opening Up
DragonZeus1 chapter 5 . 11/20/2013
For Star's you should include Blackfire & Wildfire.
moonie chapter 6 . 11/18/2013
erm... well. i heard star's story differently. i heard that kommander took charge of tameran and sold koriander into slavery. and that ryander was sent away because tameran was losing and they needed at least one royal sinling to go away and start life on another planet...
moonie chapter 3 . 11/18/2013
:( i thought you would show all the bad stuff of raven's past. like how trigon raped arella. in some stories, arella was evil...
iamking chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
chapter.
should warn tony the tiger if a "cereal" killer is on the loose.
jeenathespectrobesprincess chapter 8 . 5/31/2013
Okay :)
kaybay11581 chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
You could say they were...
Homestuck
jaguarspot chapter 7 . 5/26/2013
I really loved your story. If you do make a sequel don't forget to post a chapter in this one as a qarning so i know to go and read it! ;)
Juliegirl22 chapter 7 . 5/25/2013
Woohoo! I can't wait for the next one! Why'd you have to leave it on such a cliffhanger!?
Stella Bella 123 chapter 7 . 5/25/2013
Sweet ending! Can't wait for the sequel!
BlueReader chapter 7 . 5/25/2013
NOT A CLIFFHANGER! Please start Visitors soon!
WeArePioneers chapter 6 . 5/24/2013
Wow, just wow.
Guest chapter 6 . 5/24/2013
Wait,it was kind of unclear,I'm not saying go into details but I was confused by one part. When star fire said taken advantage of she was molested or raped or...what happened to her? I got what happened to black fire but unsure about star.
raven1 chapter 6 . 5/24/2013
wow starfires is more depressing than the others
raven chapter 3 . 5/24/2013
it was good but Ravens past way more depressing and interesting especially with her attachment problems and her relationship with her mom or how her mom joined a cult and stuff...
jeenathespectrobesprincess chapter 6 . 5/24/2013
:). Go for it!
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