Reviews for Secundum Vita
senawario chapter 1 . 1/1
Can't you bloody put in the summary that this is a crossover story, even if you can't classify it as such...

bloody bait-and-switch artist...
mad1zel chapter 1 . 8/5/2014
very good story I liked how stargate was sneaked in there
Rhaegal1995 chapter 10 . 6/28/2014
I have no idea what is going on any more. I assume there's a crossover in here somewhere. Sorry, but goodbye. Good writing, just not for me.
Sleepygirl68 chapter 29 . 6/28/2014
I have enjoyed reading this story as well as your other stories.
I apologize for not leaving a review for each of them but I suck at reviews.
I'm a reader, not a writer!
Anyway, thanks for writing and sharing your stories with us.
I look forward to reading more.
Zaion Indulias chapter 9 . 6/28/2014
Noticed something and just felt I had to comment.

What Harry did removing the guy's arms but leaving him otherwise alive but intact while questionable doesn't truly qualify as torture. The rest of the kills he appears to have made quick and clean.

But petrificus totalus is not some sort of stasis spell. it would leave the victim conscious (able to be awake or asleep as his own ability to sleep allowed) and fully physiologically active, just unable to move.

The average human can't survive more than three days without water. Leaving someone unable to even void their bowls, and unable to drink, for three days is unconcienable and akin to torture, and very likely to result in killing the person.

Regardless of this man's INTENT, he had yet to actually do anything in this situation actually criminal. ANd for merely thinking something Harry has more or less likely sentenced the man to death.

Just saying, that anytime you sentence someone for a crime they MIGHT commit or are INTENDING to commit, its a very slippery slope. Even then, its the conspiracy to commit which they are charged with.

Stil gonna keep reading, but felt I had to point that out. To be honest it was only the three days leading to death thing I noticed at first, but the more I thought about it while writing this the more I realized was just wrong with that situation.

-ZI
dennisud chapter 22 . 6/25/2014
I'm not sure You really needed to add gabby in this story. But I'll accept this IF you write a 'Trio' story with Harry, Hermione and Luna lovegood! THAT would be a fun story to write!

dennisud
Griffindorks chapter 29 . 11/6/2013
Lol that has got to be one of the best epilogues i've read. Good work. Hope u keep writing more stories
LWJ2 chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
An unexpectedly mature Ginny - wow, and thanks. This is the first story I've read with her drawn that way; it is pretty much how I'd expect Harry himself to feel - confused and surprised he's alive.

I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this. Thanks again, and thanks for writing and sharing this.

LWJ2
jabarber69 chapter 29 . 8/3/2013
Here, Here...you do look like shite! hehehehehe

WoW another GREAT STORY! love every minute of it...thanks for writing and of course posting this... I know you have couple more I havent read yet and I plan to get to this today or tomorrow but I also hope you either have some more you havent posted or plan to write some more...love your style of writing...
jabarber69 chapter 27 . 8/3/2013
to bad no good looking female aurors got naked...okay I know male pervert here...hehehehe
jabarber69 chapter 26 . 8/3/2013
I think you broke her...sam I mean...and I for one think Sam should definitely join the harem...
jabarber69 chapter 25 . 8/3/2013
so since he invested heavily in the muggle world, the way I see this happening is he and the others will go to this new world setup their homes, business, and government but still have their investments and ancestoral homes back on earth...the goblins should still have the bank and stuff on earth but also have homes on the new planet...with the stargate and then building those new ships gettin to and from their planet to earth shouldnt be a problem but what about the sgc?
jabarber69 chapter 24 . 8/3/2013
she might not be sam but she is close...gah to be harry now...a shudder went thru my body just then...the lucky bastard...
jabarber69 chapter 23 . 8/3/2013
its always the bookworms...love the way he took over the geezergamot today
jabarber69 chapter 22 . 8/3/2013
oooh cool gabby she cute, but what about fleur isnt she also connected? also it a shame that gabby lost her magic...
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