|Reviews for Payback|
| sarahgri99 chapter 1 . 6/18
Love it, love it, love it! Sequel, sequel, sequel! Plzzz
| Anaisse Steighart chapter 1 . 6/1
Definetely, make a sequel. I love how you were able to make Tsuna so seme here with a perfectly acceptable excuse. It's not like other seme Tsunas who just happen to have a hidden seme-ness inside. And oh, how I love your teenage Reborn. His reactions to what Tsuna was doing, Leon's betrayal, everything! Pure awesomeness, I must say. I also loved the line "Fix one thing and end up with another." Oh my... Anyway, great one-shot, good job, beautiful characterization(did I spell that right?), a wonderful smut, and enough kawaii Reborn for fangirling.
| Anon chapter 1 . 5/30
Yes make a sequel I want to see reborn all embarrassed and shy around tsuna.
This was my first 27R fix and it was AWESOME!
| Inanari chapter 1 . 4/26
If you ever have time, please do write a sequel :) I can't wait for what Reborn will do to Tsuna as payback
| Eternal Raindrops chapter 1 . 4/26
Damn. Um...that was really good. Not usually into R27, but, well, this was well done.
| Hime-chan Natsumi chapter 1 . 4/6
A mi me encanto! Fue tan explosivo, sorprendente, inesperado! Muero por una continuación. Aun que sea un capítulo pequeño sobre su relación en el futuro. Y es que, muero de curiosidad para saber como sería su relación. Muchas gracias por el "lemmon" de verdad se aprecia. Estoy agradecida, porque yo creo que ha de ser un fastidio partir el capítulo y subirlo a otra pagina, poner los link. Pero tu lo haces por el amor a tus lectores! Me conmueves! TT_TT
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/1
So...s-strange! Imean, a s...s...(YOU KNOW!) tsuna and a u...u.. reborn?!11
| NightWolf23361 chapter 1 . 12/29/2014
Ah... It really was too bad you had to delete them scenes. What are the rates there for . Grow a brain or something ZenChan (excuse me if I got your name wrong but please take note that my apology is not sincere if I did.) Please write a sequel?
| Kagekitsonegal chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
sequel would be cool
| Alicia Testarossa chapter 1 . 10/12/2014
When I came across a seme27 with /Reborn/ as the uke, I was like 'wait, what?'. I just had to click on the story because it's just so hard to find a seme27, let alone 27R. Please write a sequel to this (maybe with a R27 lemon, if you want) because I can't wait for the aftermath.
If you /do/ write a sequel, you could write the other Acrobalenos reacting to this and maybe just maybe with R27 smut xD.
| blacknekopower chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
As a french reader of this fanfiction (sorry if there are mistakes ) , i think it was really good ! I was surprised by the pairing, but it makes the story cute. As far as two men from the mafia could be, of course XD. I don't know if a sequel is a good idea, i believe that it's as you fell it: if you have ideas and inspiration, why not ? But if that's not the case, the readers (at least me) can do without, it lets a part of dream to your story.
I'm not sure this review is really usefull, but i wanted to express you my opinion of your fiction (i've read the entire fic on the archive), i was happy to read your work !
Have a nice day,
| sdfdf chapter 1 . 9/21/2014
GOSH YES PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL TO THIS i wanna see how cutie reborn reacts later
| HikaruWinter chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
SEME TSUNA EXISTS! *cheers* *of the 'FUCK-YEAH-TAKE-THAT-BITCHES-MWAHAHAHA-UKES-TAKING-OVER-THE-WORLD-BEWARE-SEMES-MWAHAHAHAHA-Oh-how-much-evil-laughter' persuasion* *I'm a complex being* *My friends insist on crazy* *My mother on peculiar* *Yes, I'm peculiar* *I like that word* *I'm like Luna Lovegood* *Ok, not that much*
| Tsumujikaze Yumi chapter 1 . 6/1/2014
Haha That was fun!
| lovleydragonfly chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
Ohhh I vote for sequel!