Reviews for Digimon: Return of the Virus King
Guest chapter 31 . 12/20/2016
I just finished reading all the chapters and its really good so far, a few grammar error here and there but all in all it's great. I'm curious who Daemon has with him. Is he a familiar face or someone new? Regarding the Virus King, will he be a real digimon or an OC? I wonder just how strong he is? I can't help but compare him to the devil and being nigh-omnipotent due to him and his sister to have created the digital world and digimon and watch over the digital and human worlds. As for the Light digimon, will she make an appearance? She may have sacrificed her body but what of her essence and power? I like how the light didn't kill the darkness/virus king due to being a mandatory existence in the universe, did you get that idea from a certain TV show? I really like Chris as a character. He's strong, kind, confident and despite all the hardships he's faced it never changed who he is. Does Chris have a bigger role than simply being Kari's Guardian?

I know it's too early to ask this and this fic is on hiatus at the moment but hear me out.
When this fic is over will you make a sequel? One that resembles Tri? I know this is an alternate universe and it takes place the same year Tri does but maybe you can make Tri alternate take place one or two years later.

Anyway enough of my rambling I'll be looking for the next chapter.
Chong Foo381 chapter 2 . 6/12/2016
Idk this chapters is very intersting
Pls update as soon
Chong Foo381 chapter 31 . 5/18/2016
Idk what happening next chapter
But this was awsome
Pls update as soon
Greymon Leader Batx flashpoint chapter 31 . 4/28/2016
oh boy this is not good either this guy is Myotismon r possible a corrupted Wizardmon or possiblyo one of the minons of Myotismon. However this bad for the digidestined if the bad guys like Belzemon and Daemon are on their back. Then their is the sourrins wow policts are always bad a thing both sides have good reason. Azulongmon is right the digidestined are the protectors of both words but humans can harm the digital world its one those conversations were both sides have postives and negatives but then end final descion needs to made I mean in digimon tri the government is getting involed with the digimon so things can lead down. I the digital world group works out well but I thought Nickolus put something in to stop the digimon from dna or going their full form maybe I forget something if I did I'm sorry. Great chapter look forward to the next one
Chong Foo381 chapter 30 . 3/28/2016
I'm still awesome but ldk what happened next chapter
Pls update soon
Greymon Leader Batx flashpoint chapter 30 . 3/21/2016
wow ths sotry was nice but at the same time intense. I really want to see the training casue some of the 01 digidestined like izzy, Joe and Mimi haven't unlocked megas yet and the 02 need to find a way to make there digimon go higher then champion spereatly encase they get cut off from eachother,. Nicholes is getting ticked but something tells me that will be part of his down fall. great chapter my freind
Chong Foo381 chapter 29 . 2/23/2016
I'm still love the story and pls update as soon as possible.
Chong Foo381 chapter 1 . 2/19/2016
Pls update and upgrader soon
PurpleStrawberry4 chapter 29 . 1/9/2016
Hi, I just read your story from chapter 1 to chapter 29. And it was really an enjoyable read. Loved how the digimon evolution logic is used. And not creating some random digimon. Loved Renamon and her character. And your OCs too. I hope that you will update sooner.
Greymon Leader Batx flashpoint chapter 29 . 12/25/2015
this was awsome i love the warp digivoling in this story i hope they all learn how to nwarp digivole. Kari is cute whatever happenes, So the bad guys are putting more and more togather only time will teel what happens but i am so stocked for the next chapter it should be awsome this was a very digi christmas
Jmac99 chapter 28 . 10/22/2015
Great chapter this Tory is amazing and I love every bit of it. Well until the next chapter, bye!
Greymon Leader Batx flashpoint chapter 28 . 10/1/2015
It was a awsome chapter i like the girl in it how LadyDevimon and Byiomon went mega it was awsome loved it. But i feel maybe some of the kids could have stayed with Kari i mean granted they are strong kids Chirs and Yan can have their Digimon go Mega and Rachel can have her's go Ultimate. thought there would be strenght in numbers at least some of the 02 kids since the spires arnt there letting the o2 digimon use their full power of DNA, Plus maybe Ken and Davis could get there digimon to go mega speratly since they two have crests Miracles for the golden egg and Kindess, But still i understand kari is in trouble but she can still help since the digimon could all super mega on Layalamon or somthing. Hpwever i did enjpy the chapter and look foward to the next one.

PS sucks the game didn't go overseas Reglion lock always suck

pps Hope you have been well
Greymon Leader chapter 27 . 8/16/2015
this was an intesing chapter I liked to see the relationships contuine, I like chris and kari though the proechy kinda makes them feel a little forced granted they are spending time togather but when it comes to prophecy's its hard to make a relastionship, though it was cute that gotomon was making it work, War Greymon has this in the bag he bea her before he can do it agaisn,
Guest chapter 26 . 7/26/2015
Are there going to be more chapters? Is there a sequel?
Fenris Korvir chapter 27 . 6/22/2015
This is a great story, take your time and have fun writing! Can't wait for the next update!
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