Reviews for Power Struggle between the Silk Sheets
Guest who chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
"God d4mmit" indeed.
SmileRen chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
Poor Saruhiko :(

Can you write one where this happens in real life?
TheProfViola chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
Uuu I didn't knew you can write so hot storys.. *A*
Niun, anyway Yeach, I think Saru wouldn't "hate" Mikoto-san if Misaki wouldn't admire him so much. And he dosen't really "hate" him. He just hate the relaconship beetwen him and Misaki. He is just jealius... :(
Rai chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
I think that if the last reviewer has a problem with 1st person narratives, it's his/her own problem. They're leaving aside many other aspects that makes something enjoyable. Judging from what I read, they didn't finish reading because it was in 1st person... woah, okay.
It can be tricky, but I think you did a very good job at depicting Saruhiko's emotions.
Pluuuuuuuuuuus it was sexy as hell 8D
Guest chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
It's like pure porn without actual plot. ._. Besides, the first-person narrative just makes it more disturbing than ever (Damn, I have an undescribable hatred for that first-person thing). I'm sorry, but to put it in a nutshell, I can't even finish the story properly.

You're an amazing writer with a brilliant imagination. I want your dramatic, funny yet so sexy stories back. Hope that you will give us more in the future.
Deaths Lie chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
"My sweet, innocent Misaki. He truly didn't know any better back then. Come to think of it, I still don't believe he knows any better even today." I think I woke up my entire house laughing at that :D

That was very well written, and hopefully actually supposed to be as erotic as I found it to be. Thank you for sharing and wow :D I enjoyed that. I'm actually up now.
DidiMag chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
This was very HOT. It's not easy to write smut about a threesome...but you managed to write it very well. It's interesting to see Saru's thoughts about Mikoto... I think he doesn't really hate him, too. His hatred is stronger, but he's also attracted to him like all the other Homra members. Aaaaah your stories are always the best!
HebaAce chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
It was a very unique take on Fushimi and Mikoto's relationship. It also showed how Fushimi really is trapped. He can't escape Misaki because of his love and he can't escape Mikoto because Misaki is with him. Kinda dark really. i really like the glimpse of Fushimi's inner mind and deepest desires. What i got from your one shot was that Fushimi really wanted to be with Misaki even if it meant Mikoto came with the package. (if that makes any sense at all...)