Reviews for Decepticons Only Heir
Gayboywholovesanime16 chapter 3 . 11/2/2017
This is amazing please update again soon please and thank you.
Guest chapter 3 . 6/15/2017
o.o
Guest chapter 2 . 6/15/2017
:) This is great
Guest chapter 1 . 6/15/2017
:)
sakuralovelight chapter 3 . 4/30/2017
i like this so far hope to read more soon
Dinojack2002.2 chapter 3 . 4/6/2017
Hey how come you left the story
doomsword21 chapter 3 . 11/22/2016
um hello ive waited a 3 years you here me THREE FUCKIN YEARS for the next chapter so WERE THE FUCK IS IT
Hivedragon chapter 3 . 7/28/2016
I do hope that you will get back to this soon.
starlight.moonlight.sunshine chapter 3 . 9/17/2015
heheheheheheheheheh
FINISH IT!

(all hail lord starscream :))
dragon god 758 chapter 3 . 6/18/2015
Nice story here
Secret chapter 3 . 11/21/2014
OMG... FUNNY! I WANT MORE PLS!
Dreadnought Mattherious chapter 3 . 8/20/2014
please Please continue the story
Guest chapter 3 . 9/24/2013
Interesting
Asil Tark chapter 3 . 7/16/2013
Update soon pretty please.
Safe runner chapter 3 . 6/26/2013
Love the concept. Love Jack's attitude.

Check your grammar and you should also check your spelling. That's about what's bugging me. Could be a little more descriptive in scenes... like instead of saying stuff happened.. say how that stuff happened the noises made, the feeling's felt, and emotional reactions..

But hey, I'm lovin' this. Just check your spelling, perhaps spell check and if you're not sure there is . There are also beta readers available too.

I look forwards to more! I would love to see some Miko/Jack bonding time too!
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