Words Cannot describe how much i loved this story, i e-mailed you about it once and im so glad that i found it on here too so that now i can read your other work. You're Brilliant, keep it up

I truly loved this story - excellent pacing, good character devlopment and analysis (particularly on Ethan, whom you had to design from scratch, almost) .. an excellent story in an of itself, and certainly one of the best (if not THE best) SD fanfictions on the net. It's a chame that not many people have read and reviewed this piece, especially since it's of such high quality ... I'll be sure to read your other stories in the future _

Ah, that was a gooood story... And the "first kiss" chapter was SO NOT BAD! Don't be so hard on yourself! I thought it was really sweet, n, well, perfect for this fic. I think this whole thing can only be described as a feel-good fic. There's just no other way to describe it, none. Congratulations on a job well done! Tho I wouldn't mind an epilogue, just to tie up every little thing and put a completely worry-free smile on my face. So, if u have some free time, hammer out a few lines. K, great job, keep writing, you've got talent!

What a great story! I really enjoyed reading it! In fact, I must confess, I've been getting next to nothing done on my political science essay because I keep going back to reread it everytime I sit down at my computer! Lol! Eh, grades aren't that important, are they?

Anyway, brilliant job. Really, just smashing. Can't wait to read the sequel *coughcoughhinthint*

Keep up the good work, hope to see more soon!

(very soon, mind you! I don't think I could take the distraction over exam week! Haha, jk)

-Casey

Wow, what can I say to that ending- no the whole story?

It was perfect, from begining to end and it really tied into the movie.

On the other hand, some deleted scenes and maybe a small epo. wouldn't be so bad.

I looked at your bio, and I must say that I'm interested in #1, 3, and 4 on your ideas list.

As always, I look foward to any new story you put out and I cannot wait until you update on FonF. I hope you succeed in acting and I hope to see you on the silver screen!

This a super cool story! I really loved it. Please write more.

I love your story! If there was any way to, you should publish it. It's Awesome! Great job, and I hope to see an epilogue. I hope enough ppl are interested. Keep writing!

this is an awesome story. I would love to hear more. please email me when you update this again.

You are masichistic I swear. You have to update before we go insane. This is a great story and I really am enjoying it. I'm looking forward to the next update.

Darn! Can this story can any better? I hope so.

That is the best story i have read on this entire scooby doo fan fiction site. You should really do some more Velma/Ethan or even maybe Velma/someone else stories. you are really good at it. I loved the story, so hurry and put up the last chapter and epilogue. I can't wait any longer. please hurry. I don't mean to be impatient, but I loved your story. It is exactly what i would have hoped for in a Velme/Ethan relationship. Thank You. My friends and I are big Velma fans so keep writing these fan fictions about her. Again, thank you. (although I would improve upon the length of each chapter. They are a bit too long for my taste. and I love the sappiness. Good Job! Keep up the good work. Oh, and if you could, keep telling the readers about the feelings that the other people in mystery inc. are having about the relationship. like shaggy or scooby even. it would be most appreciated. Again, this was an awesome story, so don't slack off now. I liked the way the first kiss took place. It was very original. The only thing that could be sappier would be a Velma crying on Ethan's shoulder scene. I would even hint at an even more exclusive relationship if i were you. (wink) i don't mean go overboard, but make them a little less shy around each other. I am sorry if i am a little pushy here but, i am trying to tell you what people like my friends and I want to hear. thank you for reading my reply goodbye!

Very good chapter, very good. It's about time that Velma let go and finally found her a good man. Even though this is not the final chapter, I have to say that this was one of my favorite stories to read. I hope when you finish this one, you continue writing stories and I will contiune to read them.

wonderful! absolutly fantastic. you musst write more

I was delighted to see sombody finally write a good velma oriented story. Its good to see that im not the only one who sees a little deeper into velma. WRITE NEXT CHAPTER QUICKLY!

Wow, you have manage to excite me more to hope that this wonderful story keeps on going. I really hope you put out the chapters like this at a regular pace and I will continue to read/review/and generally support you while you write this story.