|Reviews for Marvel Phantom|
| XxXFoxieXxX chapter 7 . 11/3
This is awesome! I'm not going to lie, I also thought it was wierd rhat no one ever looked into the appearance of ghosts as scientists and that the Fentons weren't world famous for their findings, and I love that you've written about that!
| Cindar chapter 7 . 10/8
So Jazz is not a mutant?
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/7
Okay I Guess The Story Must Be Dead
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/7
is this story still being worked on?
| Slenderbrine chapter 3 . 10/5
"This isn't a cartoon or a comic book, Jazz."
Correct, Danny. This is actually a fanfiction. It's not even canon to your original timeline. :3
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/5
I seriously hope you try to finish writing this story...
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/3
Disappointed that this story has been neglected for a very long time
| HerdingDog1 chapter 7 . 9/8
OH MY GOD WOW how have I not seen this fic until now!
The whole "portal to the afterlife and antigravity vehicles should make a much bigger splash" is something I have to admit haven't seen, nor thought of as a plot for a DP fan fic.
And really, until now, the fic has been so good that it would well survive as a solely DP fic and not a cross-over (but you certainly won't hear me complaining!)
LOVE it. I know it is almost a year and a half since there was an update, and it is hope against hope to see one, but I would so dearly love it as it is truly amazing.
| dragonwingz13 chapter 7 . 9/5
I like how Jazz is developing but the chapter just doesn't flow very well with the previous ones. Maybe breaking it up and integrate it into the other chapters with some kind of marking to show the transition of perspective would help with that. Is Jazz maybe a mutant? If so will she eventually meet anyone from the X-Men?
Also was the mention of the Fenton ancestor in the Salem witch trials containing a spirit with the Bloodblossoms a reference to the time Danny in cannon ended up in the past and captured in a similar way?
I can't wait to read more of this story it is very well written.
Thank you for being an author!
| mymag99 chapter 7 . 8/14
please write more and update soon.
| icfehr chapter 7 . 7/18
Man this is so interesting but no updates ~cry cry~.
| internet troll chapter 5 . 7/1
Awesome story so far. You mentioned Jack O'Neill being in the same unit as William Fenton in WWII would that unit happen to be the Howling Commandos with Caption America? Also do you think Maddie Fenton is going to teach Danny and Jazz self-defense to protect themselves because Danny was chased by a mob, Jazz was assaulted, and Maddie is a ninth degree black-belt? Next Jazz's family tree project mentioned that branches that she lost track of or could not finish tracing so does that mean there are other ghost hunters around the world related to the Fentons? Finally what about characters like Valerie Gray she was an important character in the series so will she be moving too or will there be a different plot twist? Also does Axion Lab exist?
| Pegasus Sword Master chapter 7 . 6/17
It's like Danny and Jazz are going on parallel adventures. It's nice to see Jazz with some powers, and I love how they are related to her love of all that physics.
| marco2o chapter 7 . 6/5
yay! please update as soon as possible please and keep up the great work!
| toolazytologin chapter 7 . 5/8
I'm honestly impressed with this story. You have made a story with more believable character progression and impact of major events on worldviews than most others that I've read on this site. Some of the chapters had problems with typos on some words here and there, but by and large the grammar and spelling is excellent. Hope you come off your apparent hiatus soon and post another chapter!