|Reviews for Marvel Phantom|
| Son of Zeus0001 chapter 3 . 5/31
I recognize that the story is on hold, but I figured I'd toss in an idea for how to introduce Valerie. In canon, her dad loses his job after the incident with Cujo, and we see him later as kind of depressed while they are living in a run-down apartment. There are other appearances too, but that is the one that gets the most screen time. So, why not go with that same intro, but have the Fentons offer him a job? They need security after all, or at least that was Howard's suggestion. And, with Vlad supposedly gone, what better way for Val to get her hands on ghost tech? Unless... of course... Vlad isn't actually dead, or is and just comes back.
Also, I vote for a Danny x X-23 pairing. The idea of Danny getting the shovel talk from Wolverine just tickles something down inside me.
| Schattenlos chapter 1 . 5/31
A hidden gem, hope you'll continue this story
| Mariepc chapter 7 . 5/23
Hello? are you going to continue this story? because its really good! i hope you continue it
| Phantom-Thunder chapter 7 . 5/16
OK so Danny takes after Williams side and Jazz gets a x gene...? from somewhere on Maddies side.
The house is enchanted. .. probably with wards instead of natural barriers. Although alchemic masonry isn't exactly natural. The water is probably for non ecto undead. Unless I miss the part where that tried to keep out too. Marvel's version of Death is rather interesting as she might try to adopt Danny or something. Maybe Freakshow is part that necromancer branch of the family and doesn't carry the name Fenton but Showenhower and is part of the Circus of Crime.
Nobody has mentioned Hulk rampaging or anything is under the radar right now? The Hulk usually comes up in conversation randomly due mass property damage. I'm really liking this, it reminds me of a story I started but haven't published called Marvelous Phantom, except Danny fixes the portal, his parents end up trapped in the ghost zone, so Danny goes to Wakanda and the Savage Lands to find a way to rescue them while trying to control his rampant powers and being chased by men in suits. My only tiff is the spikes on Danny's outfit, although I do appreciate that you made them spectral constructs instead normal clothes that colors changed.
| InternetTroll 13 chapter 6 . 5/6
Will Danny and Jazz's jumpsuits have built-in ghost weapons like their parents jumpsuits?
| bsdurler chapter 7 . 5/3
Please update soon it's killing me not knowing what's going to happen next
| InternetTroll 13 chapter 5 . 4/27
will we get a backstory of what happened with hydra in 1975
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/17
Hope this isn't abandoned as I really can't tell you which of your DP crossovers I like more and this is coming from someone who never watched the show. Anyway just wanted to say say this story is well written and engaging to the point its one of my favorites on this entire site I seem to reread every couple months and enjoy it more every time. Thanks for sharing.
| lordphoenex11 chapter 4 . 4/14
Absolutely incredible. The way you describe each character's personality, especially with jazz is masterful. Keep up the good work.
| the-darker-side-of-things chapter 7 . 4/7
Do u have any plans to continue this beauty? I'm intrigued
| GoliathPyroson chapter 5 . 4/6
ok at this point i have so muchr respect for you, this is amazing
| QuestionsForSome chapter 7 . 3/14
Will there ever be an update?
| InternetTroll 13 chapter 7 . 3/7
I'm not sure if you're going to read this but PLEASE update soon.
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/23
I like your story but I find it a bit insulting that you think religious people would react that way. I certainly wouldn't. But I get your gist. People are afraid of what they don't understand.
| XxXFoxieXxX chapter 7 . 11/3/2015
This is awesome! I'm not going to lie, I also thought it was wierd rhat no one ever looked into the appearance of ghosts as scientists and that the Fentons weren't world famous for their findings, and I love that you've written about that!