Reviews for The Xana Confederation
Overrunner chapter 13 . 9/9/2013
Such loyalty Jeremy. Good chappy! Update!
VR Commando ATA chapter 13 . 8/5/2013
William's an asshole to everyone. I am kinda wondering if he'll warm up to them and vise versa.
BabyBird101 chapter 13 . 7/10/2013
Amazingness I am obsessed this is amazing next chapter please!
Desert-chan chapter 13 . 6/27/2013
This just keeps getting better. I really cannot wait to see where you're planning to go with this!
Cont chapter 13 . 6/27/2013
Descriptions*. My phone sent the review too soon. Anyways you're an awful person for torturing me last night with this chapter. Poor Yumi, but I should have known.
Rena chapter 13 . 6/27/2013
She looked like a broken bird that needed to be free. this was one of my favorite lines. Also the line about ulrich needing to know if he needed to shoot something. I could really hear your voice coming through

This was rough for me. I guess that helped with the uhm
John Thatcher chapter 13 . 6/26/2013
I'm liking what you are doing with the last two chapters. They are so exciting and anxiety-filled! Whatever you did with these two keep it up!
Lyoko fan2311 chapter 8 . 6/24/2013
Oh my god!
You didn't just kill someone did you? I don't know if I can deal with that.
obsessivefanno.4 chapter 12 . 6/23/2013
Omg how could u leave it there?!plz update soon:)
RascalKat chapter 12 . 6/23/2013
O.O What the heck just happened?! Such a good chapter, although there were a few missing commas. I can't wait to find out what happens next!
John Thatcher chapter 12 . 6/23/2013
Whoa... One of the best chapters yet, the ending was full of suspense and had me almost literally clinging to my desk! Wow
bill chapter 9 . 6/23/2013
i absolutely love this
Guest chapter 10 . 6/23/2013
holy cow! this is incredibly intense
Guest chapter 4 . 6/23/2013
amaxing writing
Guest chapter 5 . 6/23/2013
aww i like jeremy, and of course even in the middle of a war he's infatuated with aelita
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