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![]() ![]() Kate needs to earn castle him fall in love with her again. |
![]() ![]() uggghh you're going to break my heart again with this one aren't you? :) i really do like the premise of divorce. i think it's interesting to write bc it has to be something pretty big like this to make it work so i'm excited to see where you take it! and excited that you've promised it'll end well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am so happy to see a new story from you, and can't wait for the next chapter. Welcome back. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad you ate back, but jeez this might be a tough one to take. Especially with all the fluff and happiness I'm writing in my story. Trust me when I say this though, if you write it...I will definitely read it all the way to the end! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your writing is always powerful. This is only the setup and already I can feel your words worming their way into my heart, tendrils spreading, strumming a patient pattern just waiting to tighten their vice-like grip with every new chapter. Bring it on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start! I love it! A little sad but I have faith :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() IT'S A NEW STORY! YAAAAAAAAY! Don't let Castle forgive her easily, I feel like Beckett gets a free pass by a lot of people to do whatever she wants even if it hurts Castle with no consequences. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this chapter. I loved how Kate is now coping with the loss of her son. I loved how Dr. Burke had been helping her again. I loved how Rick has filed for divorce. Please continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. I am surprised you are writing this for some reason. I don't know why, but it's going to be really wonderful to see how you do this and keep it fic fresh and original in that poetic way you always write. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank u for just ripping my heart out. Just...sigh. But i do see this as plausible. Losing a child takes its toll, not everyone can take it. But as you said i do believe in them and their love and its scope, you didnt have to say there will be a happy ending, i know there will be. But im sure you're going to make this journey as heart-wrenching as possible and ill be looking forward to hv my heart wrenched and then eventually have it fixed by your lovely writing. Cant wait to read more :) |