Reviews for Unfinished
ColieMacKenzie chapter 3 . 4/26/2014
Oh god those poor people, so much pain.
ColieMacKenzie chapter 2 . 4/26/2014
*quietly sobbing already* This is so devastating - Caro how did you even manage to write this without breaking down? My heart hurts, for what they all went through, Kate and Castle and Alexis; I can't even be upset with Kate for leaving even with the evidence of how much it broke all of them because such grief, it's just irrational like that.
ColieMacKenzie chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
Only the first chapter and already I'm weepy from the devastating sadness. Your writing is so good and spot on, the grief so tangible that I'm sucked in already and yet I don't know if I'll be able to handle what's to come.
vgross chapter 28 . 4/13/2014
This story is absolutely beautiful. ..never had a ff make me cry like that...kudos
Tony7323 chapter 28 . 4/9/2014
Well I Have To Say This Story Was Very Hard To Read It Really Hit Me Right In The Chest. I . The Subject Was A Very Good One To Write About And You Did A Fantastic Job Writing It Well Done . This 1 Of The Best Stories I Read On This Website Congrats On This Masterpiece.
shellee3 chapter 28 . 4/7/2014
What a beautiful,sad,enlightening story. I cried so much. Thank you
muppet47 chapter 28 . 3/30/2014
Okay, I have this massive, massive TBR list, and this was on it, so I thought I would read a chapter or two, and then I accidentally read the whole thing at once. So I basically spent the afternoon reading and crying. This is so sad, and so lovely, and in the end so hopeful about the love and healing that can come out of horrible tragedy. I really enjoyed it, even if I did go through a box of tissues.:)
Onelife30 chapter 28 . 3/20/2014
Loved this story! So sad but yet so good!
UndercoverBeta chapter 28 . 3/19/2014
I just spent the best part of two days reading fanfiction, read four fairly long stories from start to finish and this is now listed in my faves along with the other three. I loved this deeply emotional, surprisingly hot and superbly well written story. Thanks to the person who recommended them to me and thank YOU for every word!
spookyange chapter 28 . 3/18/2014
I just finished this wonderful story and had to comment. It was very painful at times to read but I trusted you that it would all end well. It was well written, full of emotions and felt real and with a wonderful and uplifting ending. I can't wait to read more of your work. Thanks!
LOCISVU chapter 28 . 3/17/2014
KUDOS!
LOCISVU chapter 27 . 3/17/2014
Finally!They can have the closure that they both need.
LaLa111202 chapter 28 . 3/13/2014
I have to admit that I didn't want to read this...I have three boys myself and usually steer clear of child death stories bc that is my most horrible nightmare. But I am so glad that I stuck with this story! It was so, so good, and I bawled the last few chapters in the best possible way. Beautifully done. Thanks for sharing!
BlueOrchid96 chapter 19 . 3/11/2014
Another beautiful chapter. Fear, hurt, and hope all pulling in different directions. Such a great read!
InkyCoffee chapter 28 . 3/11/2014
Just read the whole thing from start to finish. Cried through at least 2 dozen tissues. I have no words for just how beautiful this journey was. Thank you.

*HUGS YOU*

-Lou
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