Reviews for Unfinished |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I was rereading this chapter. The brilliance in this chapter! And I just had to thank you again for sharing it with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you so much for taking the time to carve out this amazingly beautiful story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story! You did a great job(: |
![]() ![]() Great story. Kind of sorry to see it go but glad for the way it turned out. Thanks for it. GREAT JOB! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello, I found this story and read it all yesterday and I loved it. It was beautiful and sad. You did an amazing job with a subject like this. |
![]() ![]() Amazing. One of the best fanfics I've ever read on this site. If you don't do this for a living, you should. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a sweet and beautiful story. I actually read chapters 1-27 in 2 days, but avoided the epilogue because I didn't want to see it end. And what a hopefull end. :') Thank you for writing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Once again, this was a beautiful story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG you have me crying, this was such a beautiful ending for such a tragic loss. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Much sleep was lost reading this as fast as I could. I cried. Many times. Ugh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() * won't let me post a review on the epilogue, so I'm doing it here: I'm trying to wrap my brain around how best to describe "Unfinished", but am once again at a loss for words, so please forgive me if my review is low on eloquence and high on ZOMG FEEEEEEELS! I was a bit hesistant to start this, to which you can attest, because I knew the caliber of writer you are and I knew I would be putty in your deliciously evil hands. But you kept insisting "Trust me, you know me", so here I sit, a box of tissues in one hand and a Prozac shake in the other. I kid, but while reading this I wasn't too far off. Looking back at all the chapters, I felt like I just went through all the stages of grief myself. So many things stood out to me. I was moved when Kate first tries to go back into the baby's room, but absolutely floored at Castle's breakdown upon seeing her, and then her breakdown. I kept wanting to reach in and hug Castle when he was going to his meetings and trying to get a sense of normalcy. And the way you described Kate's screams when she discovered Jackson, wow, I can still hear it in my mind. Those poignant scenes stand out to me most because you wrote those two as the completely broken people they were, mostly because they were without the other. I like the fact that you started their story here. It almost felt like a crossroad, that there might have been a chance that they would walk away from each other, but would continue on as a shadow of their former selves. And then the way they came together was even more sweeter because of the pain. I love that. As much as enjoy a good fluff fic, I felt like their happiness was earned here. That's why I'm a sucker for such well written angst, and this was a prime example. There are so many things that come to mind when I look back on this fic, and yet I cannot form an articulate response in projecting my thoughts about it. The details you use are, once again, beautiful and very convincing in portraying the atmosphere and overall mood. I felt like I was in the room with them. The careful build-up of tension early on was heartbreaking but necessary, because the the scenes at the hospital, the Hamptons, or the meetings were so welcome that it was almost cathartic. Seriously, there is only one explanation for how you can do all that: Sorcery! ;-) Great job on tackling such a tough issue and doing it with such finesse and skill. As your faithful reader, I can most definitely assure you that I am quite emotionally 'finished', but will eagerly devour any other painful angst you throw my way (if that isn't the finest example of Stockholm Syndrome, then I don't know what is;) Cheers on another fabulous fic! -Dia |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is stunning! (not my full review but I'm sitting here in a daze looking at the screen and I figured that warrants acknowledgement, even if I don't quite have the words for it yet) Just wow! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was an absolutely beautiful story. I couldn't stop reading it. It was very well written. I could feel their pain and heartache. Fantastic job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so heartbreaking that I have to take breaks from reading. (And that's a compliment in case you were wondering. ;)) I'm afraid to continue but hooked at the same time. For some reason I just found this story now but I'm glad I did. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a beautiful ending for such a beautiful story, thank you so much! |