And now I’m crying.

And if I thought the last chapter was heartbreaking, gosh. What a great and painful story you’re telling. You truly have a way with words.

This chapter was heartbreaking and so good at the same time. I’m loving this fic. I’m sure it was emotional to write, but it’s so well done. Thanks!

It’s almost 4 A.M. and I know I will be kicking myself in a few hours but my god...I don’t think I have ever read something that put me through such an emotional roller coaster. As a mother myself, my first to twins, one who happens to be named Jack and that barely made it but is now thriving...I am shocked I even made it through this story, but so happy that i did. Beautiful, heartbreaking, and heartwarming story telling. Thank you.

No words ... Wonderful story ... My soul cried too.

It's 3.30am and I'm crying like a baby. Happy tears, truly.

Thank you for this story. You manages to turn an unspeakable loss into a beautiful story. I truly hope you're not drawing from experience, but if you are, or if anyone close to you is, I wish them all my best. I wish they'll find this love and strenght in their partner or in their support system as well.

In any case, thank you for showing us the joy during the darkest days.

Wow! So I realize how late I am reading this and commenting on it, but I saved this one for when I could read the whole thing in one shot. I honestly didn’t know what the story was going to be about. When I saw it was a child’s death, I immediately began to cry. Not because of the content, but because my baby girl died almost 11 years ago. I felt everything you poured into this story...every word, every heartbreak, every single emotion they felt I also felt. There is no greater loss than the loss of an innocent child. When this happens, something inside you snaps, you are no longer the person you were the day before. The guilt you feel for not being able to protect your child. I prayed I would die, just to be with her...to see her face, to hold her. As I sit here now commenting, tears are streaming down my face even after all these years. The pain NEVER goes away, but each day that passes I know I’m getting closer to seeing her. The raw emotion that I felt while reading this and feeling for Kate especially, took me right back to January 15th, 2010. I remember it like it was yesterday, hoping I would not wake after I closed my eyes. I’m not sure if you’re going to see this since the story is many years old, but I needed to share with you how tasteful you captured this subject which is not easy. You didn’t diminish the significance of their true pain and heartbreak, and for that I thank you. If I didn’t have my support group while I was going through my loss, well I can’t say where I’d be today. Rest peacefully my sweet Olivia...mommy loves you. xOx

Unbelievably brilliant. Just read the whole story. Wow, simply wow.

Such a beautiful story. Thank you for sharing.

I have read this story so many times and each one it is gripping in every way. So wish you still wrote for this universe!

Great story! I'm a 24 year old guy, completely unashamed at saying I cried.

Hello once again
I have just re read this story for I don't know how many times once again

This is one of the most haunting and most heartwarming stories .
You have crafted a masterful story.

You have shown how true love heals .
You capture the true love that Kate and Rick share for each other and their family

Thank you for sharing
I hope you return to writing for this in your soul love story of Rick and Kate and their family

God bless you and your family

This story...was so very heart-wrenching and heart-warming. The idea of Castle and Beckett losing their first shared child to SIDS is so very believable...and Kate's reaction to the tragedy was sadly very much character. Though I'm glad our favourite twosome managed to get a happy ending and help others who were suffering.

I believe this is the best story about Kate and Rick that I have read and I’ve read lots of them! You are a great writer! Are you still writing?

Absolutely brilliant, thank you