OMG THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL! I had tears jn my eyes! Really amazing ending of a great story! I trully love it! Huge congratulation!

Absolutely adored this story! Love how you finished it and I am so glad that Lillian and Peter ended up together again :) You did this storyline great justice and I thoroughly enjoyed following it! Thank you!

This story was just so beautiful I can't even put it into words. And you talked about such a scary and poingent topic with grace. Thank you for this story and I look forward to reading whatever you have coming next :)

Ok, I'm crying and I've only skimmed the chapter (until I have time to read it). I love what you did with it, not just with the characters, but as a help to any reader who has lost a child or encounters these issues in any way. And what a wonderful way to end it! Thanks for sharing this story.

all the babies.
what a beautiful ending lovely
x

This is not okay. It's not. It's not. Kate's about the only thing that could break him. And it's actually happening. And it couldn't be less okay if it tried. If the cops ask what did me in, just tell 'em it was words.

*I think there's a good chance I'm being overly dramatic but I don't care :P

I think I might not survive this story. I just thought you should know.

What a beautiful story you have written. It is a reminder that God makes something beautiful out of our brokenness - thank you.

Loved the story. You handled the grief exceptionally well. The only comments I can make are in grammar. You have a tendency to use the present tense when writing. Most, if not all, stories read much better of they are told in the past tense. "She nods" should be "she nodded". Also, rein in the adverbs and adjectives when writing. Not everything needs to be "her eyes filled with ecstatic tears". Make it simple.

Beautiful. There are just no other words Xx

Very interesting story. The journey back to each other was beautiful.

AMAZING STORY. SOOOOOOOO good. I loved, loved loved reading it,

Cant tell you enough how much I love this story. it was so well conceived, written, and I am sorry that it is over. Glad it is , with a happy ending, but loved when I got the email that a new chapter was up.
I loved that fact that i could totally see KB acting this way (god forbid) and it was so sad with them in the beginning. I think you held the tone , just right through out the story.

Again, thankyou thankyou thankyou. Looking forward to Epilogue. Actually started to re read the story, just cause I enjoyed it so much. This was one of my all time favorite things I have ever read.

With the be a sequel ? :-)
thanks again,
Best Regards,
-John Z

Amazing. They're coming full circles in more ways than one, but they've also covered so much ground. I could write an essay about how magnificent your story is, but 1) work is calling 2)I'm typing with the fingers of one hand, since my other hand is busy holding a tissue. Darn, you did it again. And thank you.

My review will be straight and short: this chapter too included, your story is so much MORE than fanfiction...

Fantastic chapter, this is such a great story! Thank you for sharing it.