Reviews for Unfinished
alia chapter 6 . 3/15/2015
so im only on chapter 6 but i wanted to tell you that you have accomplished the ultimate feat: you made me cry, like tears streaming down my face, and i NEVER cry. like ever. so congrats
Scarletinii chapter 28 . 3/2/2015
Great story! :)
ksatan624 chapter 28 . 2/18/2015
Cette histoire est tout simplement sublime. Félicitations. Une des plus fic. que j'aie jamais lue.
SeannysMom chapter 28 . 12/23/2014
I just spent more than four hours reading this story. Once started, I could not stop. I have no words to say how much I enjoyed and loved this story. It was both poignant and beautiful. This story is remarkably written. All emotions are perfectly described : sadness, despair, anger, joy, hope ... This is one of the best stories I've ever read. Thank you for this wonderful story.
Phoenix226 chapter 28 . 12/13/2014
Wow! This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read. So poignant! You can write emotions so well. I just found this tonight and am so glad I did.
63Bulldog chapter 28 . 11/16/2014
This is the most powerful story I have ever read on this site. You captured the anguish and devastation of grieving parents as well as the renewal of hope and love. Well done. Thank you.
Lord of Kavaka chapter 28 . 10/26/2014
Oh this was so good. From the angst to the cautious hope and struggle for redemption/reconciliation it was well written. I really liked that they reconnected at the Hamptons on the eve of Jack's passing, and how Castle thought that part of Jack's legacy was bringing his parents back together and strengthening their bond. I really love how she went to the grief support group with him. That whole scene was very touching and emotionally powerful. The ending was great. It showed that they were able to move on it still remember. I'm glad they kept in touch with Pete and his wife, and were able to help them. Thank you for writing and sharing this heart breaking yet extremely moving story with us.
Caskettlove77 chapter 28 . 10/8/2014
I just spent the whole day reading your story. It was so beautiful, emotional and real. You have a great talent for expressing full emotion in your writing. It was a beautiful read. Thank you.
caskett-tiva21 chapter 28 . 9/30/2014
Wow! I was doing something else before I started reading this and wanted to get back to it, but I couldn't. That story is just so amazing. It's deep and tragic and beautiful at the same time. I just had to read it all at once, which doesn't happen very often. Sad that it ended, but that ending was great!
GT500RonSmith chapter 28 . 9/21/2014
Really nice! Twin daughters and a son on the way! And they helped bring Pete's marriage back together! Both of them, as a team again!

I really loved this story!
GT500RonSmith chapter 27 . 9/21/2014
It's like a memorial to Jack and the best part is that Alexis did it and included Kate! She's home and this most important part of their home doesn't exclude her! She has to know that deep down, they were all waiting for her to come home!

Very, very imaginative! This is why people like you can write so well, and folks like me write stuff that sits on their computer at home! What a difference!
GT500RonSmith chapter 26 . 9/20/2014
I don't know that I would give up a whole lot of action with Kate just to write! Might need a break now and then at least!
GT500RonSmith chapter 25 . 9/20/2014
Even the impossible!
GT500RonSmith chapter 24 . 9/20/2014
What a great name for this chapter! Very nice!
GT500RonSmith chapter 23 . 9/20/2014
So well thought out! Bravo!
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