|Reviews for The Vitruvian Man|
| ann7e chapter 1 . 4/16
Woah. That's an epic start. I love it. I'm currently rereading it (I've searched for ages for this fanfic) 'cause it was so amazing.
There are two songs which come to my mind whilst reading this:
Hero of War by Rise Against
O children by Nick Cave (to which Harry and Hermione dance in DH)
They fit very well to this absolutely amazing story. I'm sooo glad to have found this again.
| Tyneth chapter 23 . 4/13
hum good Dom/sub fics ... i don't really know what you mean by that so i'm giving you slash fics with what i think is a real plot instead of just sex ? i'm not giving you crossover fics but try some with riddick/pitch black, there is some nice one
" In Servitude to the Dark : The Hand that Guides Me " is completed and the sequel is up though the slash don't really begin before the sequel.
" Salir " by batsutousai is pretty short but nice
" Inheritance " by MidnightEmber but the story is not developped enough to say it's a nice "dom/sub" fic
" Schooled " by WyrdSmith is really good, please, just read the first chapter !
otherwise i recently found " Phantasy " by Tsume Yuki, it's not slash as far as i see it but try it, the pen is nice, the story original and the situations created are really funny. Like shooled, at least read the first chapter, it's worth it
hope it's good enough :)
| Ash-Bookworm113 chapter 26 . 4/9
This made me cry. In a good way...like a happy sad way. The vitruvian man truly is a very emotional story.
| Flux or not Flux chapter 18 . 3/16
Oh my God! Amazing, really. Gosh, I'm shocked... this is outstanding! :D
I'm officially in love with your fanfiction; and I'm a little bit sorry because I know that I won't be able to express myself as I would (I'm Italian and my English writing skills are terrible ). But you must know that what you have written is absolutely wonderful. Is not so easy to find a story so well written and at the same time with a plot so interesting and complex. It's difficult to explain what I want to say, I really haven't the proper vocabulary and grammar knowledge to do that, and maybe you are wondering about my pathetic attempt to write some sort of tangled review... what for? Well, because I want to thank you. Your Harry is amazing, your Voldemort also. I'm going to repeat myself: this fanfiction is amazing. And this chapter is the best thing I have read in a while, seriously. Pettigrew dead? You. Are. A. Genius.
I'm going to stay up all the night for continuing to reading this
[And sorry for the errors :P]
| Guest chapter 19 . 2/23
I re-read this chapter occasionally.
It's just so delicious.
| Kimichan13 chapter 26 . 2/22
| Kimichan13 chapter 1 . 2/22
| Pyrane chapter 26 . 2/17
Very interesting story again :D
And once again, you are responsible for my sleepless night ;D
Thanks for the treat !
| solsere chapter 26 . 2/16
WOW, amazing story! I have to admit, the prologue style was a bit too scattered, but I'm glad I kept reading because the chapters after that have just been wonderful! This story is now one of my favorite time traveling stories! I really love how even though Harry went through all those dark things as a soldier/fighter/etc, he still retained a lot of his protectiveness and his spirit. His meetings with Sirius Black (the elder) were poignant, as was the fight with Arcturus Black. His subsequent adoption into the Black family and how well his story worked with the Black and Potter sides did admittedly seem to convenient, but now we know that it was likely Dumbledore and his manipulations all along - an irony that despite traveling back in time, Dumbledore still successfully managed to manipulate Harry (even if he overstepped and almost doomed everyone haha). I really love how Harry became a household name in potions - and how he passively took over the world with household potions (chortles here). Harry raising Snape/freeing him and restoring him and his mother the Prince legacy was so cathartic! As was his help supporting Severus and Lily and rescuing Sirius from his harsh family. Really really wonderful. I do especially adore how you wrote Tom and Harry's relationship/banter - filled with fire and spirit, and I love that they challenged and manipulated each other, and how Harry and Tom were pretty equal in their relationship despite Tom being Harry's "lord." And wow, you made me laugh so hard when they got drunk together at the Malfoy's party; it was SO nice to read about their relationship as not so angst-ridden but with lighthearted and romantic moments as well! The last few chapters seemed a tad rushed to me, (but then I would have liked to have basked in the glow of their steady relationship a bit longer before Harry was displaced by time, haha, but I guess it totally made sense for Time to simply snap at a certain point and for him to just disappear). I am glad he wasn't gone for more than 2 years though, because wow, poor Tom/Voldemort! His descent into madness and wow, did Dumbledore suggest he create horcruxes, because that was unexpected! Speaking of Dumbledore, I do like the way you portrayed him, with his own agenda and constantly manipulating, but at the same time, not maniacally evil or anything. I love that Hermione managed to help Harry regain himself/his memories before it was too late and they were able to finally fight free of Dumbledore's manipulations, and with less sacrificed. All in all fantastic story!
| Devildream69 chapter 26 . 2/15
Exquisite. This story is of an exceptional quality and complexity. The writing is visceral and beautiful. Well done.
| Azera-v chapter 26 . 2/8
Really love this story!
| BlueOrchid2 chapter 18 . 1/18
ahahhaha that is so funny! I mean really, what are the chances?
| BlueOrchid2 chapter 14 . 1/13
ooooh! wonderful chapter! and the ending is simply glorious!
| dragoncreators chapter 22 . 1/12
Damn that was awesome... and hot.
Great story, love it.
| dragoncreators chapter 17 . 1/12
If he uses the Philosopher's stone right, he will not need the Horcruxes and won't go mad... Awesome.