Reviews for The Vitruvian Man |
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![]() ![]() I've just started reading however this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read I love every bit of it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh man, I tear a lil here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good. Submission by choice not by duty. |
![]() ![]() ![]() tut tut! Hadrian's no ones pet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm crying |
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![]() ![]() oooooh this is niceee |
![]() ![]() lovely first chapter, RR |
![]() ![]() ![]() And it goes full circle. Enjoyed the love story. Enjoyed Hadrian making a place for himself without Harry's unfortunate fame even if there is massive trauma. Riddle's obsessive and Hadrian's providing a grounding through his love. Severus and Lily making new lives. Admittedly, chapter 27 a bit too squishy for me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And Harry knew. I wondered. wasn't sure i was going to like this story. I've been on a time travel kick lately and there is a huge variation in quality out there. but your summary sounded worth a try. so far, so good. I'm enjoying Harry's new life and his subtle and not so subtle changes to the future. my only concern is him following tom rather than a partnership. after every thing he went through in the other time line, I just don't see him playing second fiddle. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, that's one way to solve wormtail. |
![]() ![]() ![]() In all honesty I wasn't sure what to think of this piece at first. The first couple chapters were hard to follow, but then things really took off and it became a beautiful story. Unfortunately I'm not quite sure how I feel about the ending. I truly liked it until the temporal shift and then it just changed the way the story felt. I did however like the twist that Dumbledore had a hand in all of it. That he was the reason Hermione had sent Harry back to save them all. I still don't know what to think about the whole thing with Time and the temporal shift, or Dumbledore causing. Tom to make Horcruxes for that matter. And the ending was rather sudden. Personally I would have enjoyed following along as the war happened and seeing Hadrian be there for it all. The whole change that happened at the end just wrapped things up so quickly and tossed so many new plot devices around at the same time. So, overall I did enjoy this story. I liked seeing Harry forge his own path and finally find happiness. I especially liked that he took in Severus and his mother, fixed the friendship between Lily and Severus, and saved Sirius from their family. Harry's interactions with Tom and Albus we're interesting, more so after he began working at Hogwarts. I quite liked the idea of those two working together to keep Harry with Tom. Of course I was also greatly amused by how Harry and Tom bantered. There was just something special about their relationship. Unfortunately things felt unresolved in a way at the end. I know Harry finally completely surrendered to Tom after piecing him back together. But the time jumps left things feeling a bit off and unfinished. I still liked the piece even with how it ended. Mostly because of how you wrote the characters and developed them. It's a pity that several of the past reviews I saw didn't seem to take any of this into account or didn't give things a chance. This was a very interesting story even with the bits of confusion at the beginning and end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This last chapter has confused the heck out of me! I LOVE THE STORY! ADD MORE PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Highly disappointed in this chapter. If what Riddle did to Harry is truly comparable to rape then to have Harry forgive him immediately at the next meeting is absolutely garbage. Beyond insulting and I refuse to read any more. This is not the start of a Dom/Sub relationship as you infer in the notes of your next chapter. This is the start of an abusive relationship, toxic beyond the pale. I am disgusted in you and your choices. |