Reviews for The Twins
Guest chapter 1 . 11/10
my 2 guys chapter 8 . 9/4
that was good keep the chapters coming
Sovereign2808 chapter 8 . 6/9
Shame really that this story was seemingly abandoned.
I liked the plot so far and it's rather well written, so...
if you (the author) read this ... I'd welcome more chapters
Guest chapter 8 . 12/30/2016
Guest chapter 2 . 9/2/2016
its slow moving. childhood years are always boring and uninteresting
ChronoMitsurugi chapter 7 . 9/1/2016
Koharu and Homura are ADVISORS, mainly because they were Srlarutobi's teammates.

Considering the size of Konoha and the inclusion of the many Clans and their ability to actively defy the Homage with political clout it has been assumed that Konoha possesses a council made up of the head of the ninja Clans and the most influential people of the civilians such as guild masters and such. Sarutobi always seemed to bow to pressure when it concerned Naruto, so none could believe it was a military dictatorship. Especially with the existence of Daimyos.

Basically it was taking all the snippets provided with no real reveal and piecing them together in the most logical manner which could then be exploited by going from badass mother figure for Naruto when we meet her to...well less so in Shippuuden seemed to support this. Danzo never really went at her with brute force, he went at her with political subterfuge which can only be possible in a political arena like a council.
ChronoMitsurugi chapter 6 . 9/1/2016
The ability to exclude Sasuke from Naruto searches. Best thing since fanfiction.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/13/2016
Wait there is a naruto movie when naruto goes to prison [Blood prison].
Guest chapter 3 . 12/9/2015
sweet, sweet agony
opinion chapter 8 . 6/15/2015
Give naruto the curse seal of heaven and the dōjutsu of ranmaru...with that kind of power,he would be easily a kage level shinobi without the curse seal activated,bijuu level fase 1 and hashirama in his prime level with fase 2. And perhaps even going out in date with tayuya or karin or even fuu(nanabi no jinchuuriki)
bulshite chapter 1 . 2/6/2015
Bullshit story - if it was too dangerous to have the "real" carrier of the Kyuubi in the village, then why leave Naruto there? Because he would still be a lure for the Atkuskai or whatever they're called. In fact it'd be worst because there would not be the deterrent of Namikaze or Kushina.

Further more - why did they have to leave anything behind? If it was possible for them to remove themselves and the girl without tipping anyone off then they should have been able to snatch Naruto up as well.

So basically I'm saying your story is complete bullshit and utterly worthless in terms of value as entertainment. Still don't give up - just trying to avoid massive plotholes when plotting out your future stories.
vahik chapter 8 . 12/20/2014
Please update this.
Thank you.
habdreas323 chapter 8 . 12/15/2014
this is awesome please continue.
OnGuard chapter 2 . 7/22/2014
Which chapter will you start the story from the present. I need to know so I know when to start reading again.
Banjo the Fox chapter 8 . 7/14/2014
Update soon!
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