YA;Amazing!~~~~~

Thank you for such an incredible fic! I really really enjoyed it, couldn't put it down!

Cool! You're in med. Me too! One constructive crit: I dont know what it is about this story but I was completely bored throughout it all. It was only at the end where Severus does that trick with the OWLs that I realized I had already read this a few years ago and was similarly bored out of my mind. Still no hint of a sequel, but I guess that's okay. I'm quite happy though that even if i was bored, it's canon-correct. No weird spelling of names or spells. No grand deviations of characters. Grammatically correct and coherent sentences. Hopefully one day Serpent's Spawn will be posted with a much more interesting plot line. Thanks!

What happened that you never did write the sequel to this amazing story?

Paragraph breaks. Honestly, having the scene switch randomly is confusing. Add an extra gap between the paragraphs or something...

Wow

What a sick bastard you are!

Love ya story! Ill continue reading ovo

Although I like the story and the characters as portrayed, I feel somewhat confused by the unusual magics Harry experiences and performs. It feels too much and inconsistent in how his visions work. It hasn't been structured clearly or something. Hard to explain, but definitely confusing.

Trelawney's reaction was priceless! I laughed so hard!

Brilliant.. it was very unique. Loved it!

I supposed your specialty is pathetic Harry and angst.

this is really a wonderful story...have you updated the sequel yet?

Great start!

I can not find the sequel anywhere. Did you post or somewhere else or did shit hit the ceiling and it never was completed.
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