Reviews for Harry Potter and the Prophecy of the Phoenix |
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![]() ![]() ![]() loved the last instalment! can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! It's going a little slow, but I like that because stories that go to fast are kind of stupid. Oh... (...Harry has to die! Well, we all expected that... Just out of curiosity, does that me that he'll be in his phoenix form when he dies? Because then he'll be reborn from the ashes... As for pairings...I'm glad that you're leaning more toward Harry/Ginny, but first, please do some Ron/Hermione...J.K. has set that up for the last four books, you know... Please post another chapter soon! I've been searching all over for a jewel of a story, and I've finally found one... |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So he's exactly like a phoenix? I'm confuzzled. Please update soon. Will Harry wake up from the visions? Will Harry's power be stronger or weaker than before? Please udpate soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello, :) Another wonderful chapter, yet again this story is amazing! So know we know for sure that Harry can be seen in the dreams and is in fact there in some way. He's a powerful wizard if he can change into a magical creature, and he now has his mother and father to protect him against the demators... and kill them, that's kool! Remus and Sirius, I do hope they're still alright, Sirius must be feeling pritty bad after another encounter with the demators, poor siri and I'm sure Remus wouldn't be looking to well either. I hope Harry will be alright! And typical Snape talking about house points when Voldermort could be close by. Great Chapter, are Sirius and Remus going to be in the next chapter, at hogwarts? Harry misses them. well, I hope to read more soon, keep up the great work! ;P -Lily Skylo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great new chapter! Can't wait to read more! With Harry having to die, I think you pratical tell us how he surives! Phoenixs burst into flames with it is time for them to die, and then they are reborn from the ashes! Can't wait to see how the rest of the story develops! Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is really good update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yeah.. new update..! Big trouble coming up soon? Interesting chapter...are they visions? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! It was very well written! I look forward to the next one, hopefully soon! Will Harry be alright! Appropriate words to end it with! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() does the magical power harry inherit from the phoenix anamagi include the power to die in flame and be reborn in the ashes- never really dieing? shield of fire... hot fever not breaking... SOMEone has to notice sooner or later! also- fawkes seems to appear & dissapear inside hogwarts- perhaps that is how harry takes physical form in his dreams? and thats twice now he's saved sirius & remus! boy, they are going to throw a FIT when they get to hoggywarts! love ur story, cant wait for the next update! ~athelas~ |
![]() ![]() First of all, let me say that I'm not very practiced in the reviewing arena-dedicated and extremely shy lurker that I am-but I'm making an exception this once because I've been enjoying your story so much that I've started to feel very guilty about never telling you. So here is my poor attempt at it. Simply put, HP and the Prophecy of the Phoenix has become one of the few on that I follow religiously. When I first stumbled across it, it was like finding a gem in a pile of rubble. Not that there aren't other good stories here...but it's so difficult to find them that sometimes it's hardly worth the frustration. But your story is most definitely worth the effort..both worth the trouble of finding, and worth the time spent waiting (very impatiently at times, I do admit! ) for your next update. This last chapter, for instance, was well worth the wait...the best one yet! Now, I've heard that authors usually like to hear at least some constructive criticism, but I honestly couldn't think of anything that I'd change. In my opinion, everything just *works*. Your writing style is very smooth, your characters believable (yes, even Snape...you've captured his personality perfectly, IMO), and the plot...well, the plot just grabs you from the very first chapter and won't let go! Very, very well done! At this point, I truly thought I'd be unable to resist pelting you with questions regarding what's going to happen next. But after some thought, I think I'd really rather not know too much. After all, why deny myself the thrill of the ride? :) But if I can't give you criticism, and I won't let myself ask a million questions, I'll at least give you my sincere appreciation for all your hard work. Thank you so much for giving me so many hours of pleasure, and I look forward eagerly to your next update! Thanks again! Nightshade P.S. Would you mind terribly putting me on your update list? I'd love to know when a new chapter is up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! excellent chapter! glad you finally updated too. please be a little faster next time! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! Glad to see that you got the next chapter up. It made my day. I really loved the interaction between Harry and his mother. You've kept him in character with all of the others (Snape,Ron, Hermione...) as well. The chapter was worth the wait. I can't wait to see what how the prophecy ends. It seems to be more than just 'If Harry dies, Voldemort dies...' thing. Take as much time as you need. And I should be writing the next chapter to AAO this weekend. The last chapter! I'm so excited about that. Love ya, Kelley |