Reviews for Harry Potter and the Prophecy of the Phoenix |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Your story is incredible! It's so well written. I love the scene with Snape. He showed a little concern without going OOC. Awesome. I hate authors who say that they won't put up another chapter unless they get 20 reviews or something like that. It really turns the readers off. I doubt anyone hated this and wants to see if banished. Wow. Lupin and Sirius are dead? They can't be..."two pairs of canine eyes were peering at the rubble from behind the bushes. /" That's them, right? Hope it is. I don't think Harry would do so well without Sirius. Dumbledore is written very well. He's still the smart old wizard he was before, but you can see he's very heavily affected by the war. You have to hurry up with the next chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next. Jaimey |
![]() ![]() This is great! I really like the way you write, and the story is getting very interesting. Please post more soon! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I seriously hope that you didn't kill Harry off! I really like this story and I want to say that you are a great writer! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! There are so many Harry-abuse stories out there that are really just disturbing and unrealisitc. It's refreshing to see your story be so believable, and actually have the abuse take a backseat to the rest of the story! The reactions of Dumbledore and Snape were so perfect! I can just picture Snape realizing what happened to Harry... wow, for once I have no idea what to say...everything was so fantastic! Poor Harry- he never has it easy, does he? I hope he tells Ron and Hermione about his uncle, though Anyway, I will stop babbling now, and just say- awesome story! You have a great writing style and a very promising plot! Keep it up, please! |
![]() ![]() Gee, you're kind of rough on all your characters in this chapter, Harry passing out, Ron having to deal with spiders, Hermione not getting to answer a question... Great job though, I can't wait to read the next part. |
![]() ![]() hey awesome fic, i can't wait for the next part |
![]() ![]() I like the story line so far.. Keep writing please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, cool first chapter. I like it! This looks like it's going to be great if you continue in this vein! Keep writing and I'll keep reviewing (if i can remember). Keep up the great work! luv baasheep xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think this is a great start!Plz continue to write! |
![]() ![]() ![]() How dare you to say, that we/I want the story banished! I love this story, please post quick the next chapter! Fin-Phoenix (sorry for the bad English, but I'm German) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is very good! I really like it! Keep writing it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked your story! I think you've got a good story started and I can't wait for the next chapter to go up. I hope you update real soon. |
![]() ![]() interesting, very interesting |
![]() ![]() Not bad. Interesting start. I'll certainly read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, poor Harry! I love this story! Keep writing. It's good so far! I love it! |