Reviews for Splintered
Guest chapter 16 . 10/27/2017
You Tony is nauseatingly holier than thou and self-satisfied - an insult to an actor who tried to create a better character than that.
Guest chapter 17 . 6/17/2017
Your Tony is pretty loathsome, a holier-than-thou Mary Sueish caricature of the TV character, and most of the characterization is one-note, but the actual mechanics of the writing shows promise.
pianomouse chapter 17 . 3/5/2017
Thank you for sharing your great story, I love when Tony gets to show his strengths.
Ihatechoosinganame chapter 17 . 6/16/2016
Amazing story, really well writen
bjq chapter 17 . 11/17/2015
1sunfun chapter 17 . 11/9/2015
Frakking Toasters chapter 17 . 8/24/2015
I really love this story. I wish this had happened or that something like it would still happen. I really want Tony to step out of the shadows and become the man and agent we know he really is. We used to get story arcs that showed more of his finer qualities, but it happens less and less now. We only get snippets and glimpses. I think I'm just ready for Tony to lead and be taken seriously and not be the silly sidekick that's not respected by his juniors (though Bishop has helped somewhat.)
Anyway, before I get too carried away! I love Tony, and I loved this fic. Really good outcome all things considered. xo
Hells Bells chapter 17 . 8/8/2015
Wow excellent job. I always thought Toby would be a better boss than about a new story to include the new team dynamics and a ' little ' hurt Tony ?! PLEASE
Guest chapter 17 . 6/27/2015
i wish this happen at the of season 6 you know ziva goes to prison that would been good but they let her go
nancyschell chapter 17 . 1/31/2015
I loved this story! I don't know how I missed it when it was published.
Guest chapter 17 . 1/29/2015
Phenomenal story ! I read it for 3 days straight, & now I feel like I've watched a blockbuster of a movie. I'll look for more ff by you. Thank you for an incredible story.
Guest chapter 17 . 8/14/2014
Great story!
Guest chapter 17 . 4/21/2014
Amazing! Terrific! Not slash!

This was a great story with lots of lovely Tony-being-awesome-and-getting-his-due-respect-ness. I like your writing style, and the plot was very well thought out. Thanks for writing such a great story that wasn't slash (it isn't my thing, but super good stories with Tony angst are).
lilawonder chapter 17 . 12/5/2013
You are always rewriting canon and healing all the bad broken places in it. I love your Tony, and I love that you don't throw Abby, Tim, and Gibbs out with the bath water...If only they would fix the convoluted mess they've written themselves into...
NCIS fan chapter 17 . 10/15/2013
Wonderful, well-rounded, deeply-thought-out story!

I really like that both Gibbs and Tim faced up to reality in the end. Tim realized that being a cyber-geek doesn't have to mean being stuck in the basement solving the crimes, it can mean teaching others how to solve them. In doing so, he can have a lot more impact than he would ever have had as a field agent. And Gibbs realized that he couldn't continue the way he was and still look at himself in the mirror every morning!

I love all of your work, and eagerly look forward to your next story!
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