|Reviews for The Prince That Was Promised|
| Blinkdawg15 chapter 8 . 2h ago
Wow. Impressive writing. Tasteful dirty scenes. Hints of what's to come..
Are you a professional writer?
| Fush n chups chapter 8 . 18h ago
Waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter (So to speak, at least). The characters are brilliantly portrayed, the motives sound and sensible, the intrigue tasteful, just... everything is done so well. I really don't know where to properly start going off about all of the content you managed to cram in, never a dull moment, so I think I simply won't. It's been told enough times in the 1.5 thousand other reviews, no doubt.
I will say, however, with complete sincerity, that this is the most enthralling GoT crossover I've read on this site. I'm pretty sure it has its own recommendation on DLP, if you care to check. Some of the community are complete snobs, but they know a good story when they see one. I didn't check, but I imagine it already has it's own TV Tropes page, as well. I hope this finds you in good health, hunched over your screen completing the next chapter... If not, well, I don't suppose there's really much I can say, other than "Please.".
| The King in White chapter 8 . 3/11
I wonder if I'm the only one hoping for Harry to engage in incestual relations with his sister and/or mother?
| Pump-Kin Cre'me Pi chapter 8 . 3/9
Loved it. Need more. Lots more!
| pucflek chapter 8 . 3/8
Why did this stop. Its too awesome to stop.
| I noticed this chapter 4 . 3/5
I get the impression that Aeryn is the daughter of Thoros, a bastard sired from a one night stand with Aeryn's mother. It would explain Thoros's interest in "keeping" an eye on Aeryn and it explains why Aeryn's religious beliefs are the same as Thoros's. Also, for two separate believers to see Harry as the Red God in human form, that is more then just a coincidence.
| Shinigamichild chapter 8 . 3/3
If Harry visits Winterfell, I would not put it past him to meet the ghosts there...specifically, Lyanna Stark. Should you write it out that Jon Snow is Lyanna's and Rhaegar's son, it would be PHENOMENALLY AWESOME for Harry to ask him to join his guard. I'm pretty sure the fire haired woman in his dreams is Melisandre and as your title hints at, she'll follow him as Azor Ahai...
But most of all, I love how you've hinted quite often and quite subtly how Harry is dreaming of Voldemort and how in this life, he may follow his route.
| Mouse chapter 8 . 3/3
Forget the story, the drama on this thread is more entertaining lol! Trolls are running about.
| Laxard chapter 8 . 3/4
Very nice work, do you work on A Game of Thrones mod for Cruasader Kings II by chance? Because i'm see more similarity to mod then books. Don't know about film, not seen it.
Heh, Harry have a stag form for his Expecto Patronum, Harry from House Baratheon... And there Shadowspawn-s (or how they called?), which have similarity with dementors. I can't get this idea out of my head)
| danyboy123 chapter 8 . 3/2
When you get your next chapter released, I wonder if you could elaborate on one subject that has bugged me since I first learned that Harry can see dead people.
Out of all gifts Harry is potentially capable of, seeing the dead appears (as far as you have written) to be his most noticeable gift but is is magic related? The power to see the dead or at least have some connection is not a gift that Harry alone can use since Game of Thrones has shown numerous individuals talking, using and seeing in their own way. But given where Harry descended from, does his seeing dead people come from his old life or is it a skill indigenous to Westeros?
It just seems like an unnecessary ability to have this early in the story. What purpose is served by Harry seeing the spirits of Targaryen family members? Unless there is something we missed that should appear obvious, all I can say is that you opened a can of worms with this. Assuming that there is no obvious reason to it, you should really explain it in later chapters because to the less educated people who know nothing about the deeper aspects of Ice and Fire, this would come off as a random non-consequential event with no reason for existing.
Hope to read your latest chapter soon.
ps: Will Harry and Aeryn be open with their relationship like Oberyn Nymeros Martell is with his paramour Ellaria Sand? Since paramours are almost equal as marriage partners it would stand to reason that Harry would not be ashamed of being open with her, whether in public or about their sexual activities.
ps2: Could you in later-later chapters have Harry test his steel against Oberyn? A fight between them would be epic.
| xXxFilipinoPowarxXx chapter 8 . 3/3
I really like your story, and I really like how you're portraying Aeryn as a loyal lover/assassin kind of character. I'm wondering if you're going to put her like Missandei is to Stannis. Also, it's March man! I need you to update this wonderfully written story!
| Sandaime Hokage chapter 8 . 3/3
Wow a great fic, really enjoyed the read, hope you update again soon, i'm curious to see where you go next.
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/28
Nobody hassle the author! We are so close to another chapter! Re read all the edited chapters, really loving the depth
| Shinkicker chapter 8 . 2/27
This is a great story, I just truly wish there was more of it. A true shame that.
You've made some interesting characters that's for sure, I'm curious what Aeryn has done, is she trying to bind Harry to her? Also, does she have Targaryen blood, diluted at it may be? I'm curious, Harry needs Dragons, or so things seem to imply, so that means Daenarys and Harry meeting (unless Harry finds his own eggs), and I doubt either of them would back down from this ruling business, so... Marriage? Would make things even more legitimate having usurper family marrying the last member of the old royal family.
I kind of see Ayra being somewhat interested in Harry, he's like Regal, but not an ass - Wonder if Sansa would be able to tell the difference between the two. Jon, Robb, and Bran would, be interesting friends I guess, especially Bran once he gets all mystical - I could kinda see Robb supporting Harry to, but that would require things going down a certain way to happen.
How long till this reaches the main story? Because I do imagine that Ned would take interest in Harry, because when word gets out about the truth of Jofferys parentage, those lords that rebel would have cause to stand for Harry even Stannis since he is so bound by laws. I could see Harry taking the Lightning Lords role in this story though, interesting coincidence that.
Thanks for posting, please post more soon!
| push-the-kitty chapter 2 . 2/26
I truly am in love with you! There are so many stories I've read on ffnet but this has to be a frenzy-maker. You take two stories, each with huge fan bases and mix them into one; and the result is a baby that holds a trophy for being the best thus far.
I would go on about how I love you but that would be a unnecessary.