Reviews for A Tale of Magic and Monsters and Lords
MinhaJubsFavorita chapter 12 . 4/29
I love the history please update !
patty.clark.792 chapter 6 . 3/22
Yaaaay Jon is leaving the Wall...
patty.clark.792 chapter 4 . 3/22
Loving this story...
patty.clark.792 chapter 3 . 3/22
I love Jon's POV. He's my favorite character.., If you could give him some affection and maybe even love, that would surely be nice.. Get him out of the Night's Watch if you can...
patty.clark.792 chapter 2 . 3/21
This is good stuff..
patty.clark.792 chapter 1 . 3/21
I have been reading Game of Thrones Fan Fiction for months now and really appreciating young fans writing stories even if their stories are written badly.. So after reading this 1st chapter of your story, I'm wondering why it took me so long to find it.. This is excellent.. You're spelling is great and your language use is phenomenal.. The story has imagination. I can't wait to see where this goes.. Oh Oh Oh, I hope to hell you finish this story.. thank you
Lucia chapter 12 . 2/14
You are a truly talented writer! I love how you created this whole story but also connected it with the real story, I just love it:)I can't wait for next chapter, please update soon! :D
SortofForever chapter 11 . 2/11
oh my god, the feels i got om this chapter is aahhhhhhhhmazing 3
Guest chapter 11 . 2/5
Love the shout-out to TWD "don't get me wrong, i love the show, but i never wanted to live the experience"! Really made me laugh
Guest chapter 12 . 2/2
Jon shouldn't go back to the wall, he cant leave storm now! i hope he decides to stay
Guest chapter 12 . 2/2
I didn't think it was awkward at all, and I like the slow built relationship. You're doing fine! Nice chapter, update soon :)
TARDIStime chapter 1 . 1/30
I (sort of) like it, but you do have a few problems. Nothing major, just a bit of OOC-ness, and having modern terms and phrases (like calling a girl a "chick", or "border-line crazy-town"). But your character is pretty well made (thank GOD that she isn't a Bloody Mary-Sue!), and other than the very few errors, not bad at all.
Guest chapter 11 . 1/30
Mmm a half-naked Jon Snow :) Moreee!
Guest chapter 11 . 1/29
I LOL'd so hard at Storm being pissed from getting her period. I love her character. And Jon and the boys complete confusion over her behavior was hysterical. The end of this chapter was so cute! I loved Ghost tricking Storm into staying with Jon for the night. Maybe he can destroy her tent next so she has no choice but to sleep with him again ;) Can't wait for more, please update soon!
silo183 chapter 10 . 1/28
Hah OK I'm a new reader just found this today and I really like this. I think I've read another story similar (someone from modern world goes to westeros) but this is much better. And Storm is great love the banter.
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